Ok, i gotta say it: it’s a really nice idea and all, you really deserve credit for it. The portrayal of the characters may be a little OC, but it’s humour and that really added to it.
But... there are a little too many mistakes in it. I lost it on the second “rediculous”. Besides that, maybe leaving the comments or author notes to the end of the chapter, after it is done would be best...
All in all, it’s a great fic for the time it was written. If by some miracle you decide to come back to it and re-write it, it would be awesome!

Ps: sorry for the long text and i don’t mean to offend you, take it as constructive criticism or just some really late advice ahahahah... anyway, best of luck.

Low key felt like there was a rwby reference there in chapter 15

I am DYING of laughter

This story is just simply fun and awesome

Go follow your heart Deidara! Go for that Sassy Woman!

Is it weird that I want her to be with Hidan rather than Deidara

that was awesome, great story!

One of the best fics I've read in a while and fuckin hilarious too! ;)

Yo this is funny
"You guys are both hot" I was dying at that part oh I know the song but I guess it's to late because it's 2015 and this was posted in 2012 I feel sad

Omg what is the real mission what is it noooooo!

This is getting good

Nah.

i just need to take a moment. THIS STORY IS HONESTLY ONE THE THE BEST NARUTO FICS I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME. I CANT EVEN THINK CAUSE ITS JUST SO PERFECTLY FUNNY AND JUST AMAZING. I LOOOVVEE THIS STORY

THIS CHAPTER MADE ME SO HAPPY I CANT EVEN.

Ya know I had never thought of this pairing before, Sakura and Deidara, but I really enjoyed this story. It was quite entertaining. It was a little confusing in one or two parts, but I peiced it all together. Its a really good story. Thanks for writing it! :) 3