| Reviews for Hogwarts One Half |
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karmakarma2001 chapter 22 . 6/28 Are you going to continue this story |
Armiture chapter 21 . 1/11 Reading this again after a few years, I can't help wondering if that blue triangular stone is one of the Royal Seals needed to lift the seals on the Rose Tower and other sealed areas of Hogwarts. Shame that you only published one chapter of new material and the original posting site has destroyed itself thanks to some insane moderators. |
Monster King chapter 22 . 11/27/2019 Great job |
dragonnargus chapter 3 . 8/19/2018 I'm glad you decided to take over this branch of the story. I've only just started and is already looking very good and amusing. |
Natalie-E-G chapter 22 . 4/28/2018 Were you unable to find all of the story? I could swear the thread ran to conclusion on . Maybe it was just one the paths I took that reached conclusion. I do remember going up and down and up and down various options. Glad you were able to save what you did. I found one of the Addventure chains, I think from start to end of threads on " ". Unfortunately the other two, I have not found. The one on only has a few of your contributions. It was nice re-reading this as it appears what is not here on is now lost. So many sites lost. So many truly great fanfictions apparently gone to as the authors died, teams broke up like J. A Wilde and B. E. Wilde (now divorced), moved on to other things in there life, or just quit writing and never kept in some cases I suspect even the originals and/or never noticed the sites they had posted to were no longer up and their stories lost. |
spicarus chapter 22 . 12/21/2017 There is potential in this story, I'd like to see some more. But, you might want to go back and clean up the time line a bit. Hope to see you update this in the near future. |
Luke Dragneel chapter 22 . 8/18/2017 An intriguing story with several wonderfully juicy idea foundations that spawn new ones. I don't know of you have read the story, but there is a non-crossover HP story that's called The Voyage of the Starship Hedwig(it has a sequel but that one crosses over into the Star Wars Verse). The VSH is pretty much a HP tries to save the magical population of Earth by leaving their native solar system to inhabit another, only the muggles are killing them off(which, in my opinion, the muggles were way too effective to be believable and the wizards reacted with more idiocy than should have been possible, considering the vast majority of the WW population was muggleborn. The brutality was actually closer to what I would expect from terrorists than trained soldiers since they were killing and experimenting on magical children and supposedly had the help of several muggleborns though none were seen.). The reason I mentioned this is because this of the chapter that mentioned creating the perfect servant from pre-existing magical creatures(with the RedCaps acting as soldiers in a wizard's army) and the various magical tools, artifacts, weapons, and items you have been mentioning throughout the story which made me wonder how this group would handle attempting to do the same as VSH instead. Especially if they were trying to avoid a certain gnome in order to prevent Ranma from getting cursed once more. But that's besides the topic, so lets get back to the review. I personally agree with how you handled Dumbledore's frankly bipolar thoughts and reactions. It explains a whole lot and personally I can see his realization provoking him into action once more. I see his unpredictability that was riding a broom rather than walking out the front gate leading him to someone he trusts to help him(someone like Nicholas Flamel or maybe Newt Scamander, both old friends with Scamander being married to the sister of an extremely talented natural Legilimence who he can trust to help him with the triggers and compulsions Snaps had more than likely added to his mind). I find this to be a good thing as it means he is now out of the corrupt influence of Snape and has a chance to heal. I still think the Dumbledore that will be coming out the other side of this traumatic discovery would be willing to ally himself with Nodoka, especially if he told her the reason behind his actions in his support of Snape. After all the vow they took was to swiftly smight evil and from what I can tell Dumbledore isn't actually evil in this and this event is sure to leave him humbled. I am finding it humorous how the Happy Gang keep stumbling onto ways to find Ranko and co. only to completely disregard it due to a lack of info and skewed perception of Ranma. Personally I think the biggest danger of discovery by the Happy Gang will be from Ryoga due to his uncontrollable ability to appear and disappear from all sorts of places by getting lost. He is more likely to stubble upon them than the others, but the chances of him being able to find them again on purpose is likely slim to none. The only thing more hilarious would be if Ranma and co. cross paths with Ryoga and Ryoga never realizing it due to their reduced ages. |
Luke Dragneel chapter 12 . 8/16/2017 True, very true. I would definitely want this Nodoka(despite being a Malfoy) on my side helping to look after my interests. Its interesting how nicely you have meshed both the HP Verse with the 1/2 Verse(especially the magic). The two different magic styles actually work well and I like that you are having them create both magical/enchanted objects/artifacts. while showing the giants(figurative not literal) who's shoulders they stand on with the arcane objects like the Pool of Stars. The fact they have to pay a price in order to obtain their goods rather than having them purchase or recover them from heirloom vaults is always a welcome change. As for the scene with Nabiki and the cleaver, I honestly got swept up on the feels and emotions in such a way as to even now can't stop thinking about it. You stabbed that dagger into my heart man, and then twisted it. Though I did find it humorous that an aquatic animal like an octopi managed to drowned in water(the best explanation I ever came across as to how creatures that shouldn't have been able to drown in one of the pools was a Harry/Ranma/Sailor Moon crossover where Usagi accidentally gets dropped into an unclaimed pool and can't escape it despite her strength coming from the Moon. Harry then, due to accidental magic caused by being told he would become the mother of Snape's child without being turned into a girl, teleports directly over Usagi's pool.). Kasumi's change from horse to Unicorn was both unexpected(in that it happened) yet unsurprising(as I figured that was what the Unicorn were up to when you mentioned the glowing silver orbs. Her coat falling out and being replaced by a golden one pretty much sealed that deal). I am actually curious as to if Kasumi will want to retain her curse form once she can get it unlocked(either through reverse engineering the Kettle of Opening or through some other means), especially if this was supposed to be a blessing as it was from the other unicorns. What girl doesn't want to be capable of becoming a unicorn(so long as the transformation isn't permanent and she can change back to her natural human form)? Maybe the transformation from ordinary horse to Unicorn will cause her to have a hybrid form that looks similar to a faunus only unicorn themed instead? I do hope to see more Ranko Nabiki interactions in the future, although the future chapters are already set in electric stone already. |
Fast Frank chapter 18 . 7/10/2017 Since this is an AU, we just have to assume some Wizard artificer discovered Platinum six hundred years before the conquistadores. |
Fast Frank chapter 17 . 7/10/2017 Even better than the old Welsh idea of having a bow sturdy enough to use as a club. |
Fast Frank chapter 16 . 7/10/2017 Oh no! An actually reason for Peter turning on James? |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 Getting hit by the killing curse and getting a piece of soul inserted into his head made Harry Potter a bit.. touched in the head. Thus these days he is known as Tatewaki Kuno... I would have loved to see this on anime addventure because it would be so gloriously strange and the story line would jump around like a hyperactive rabbit. |
BiGDeal chapter 22 . 9/19/2016 Too bad that you'd decided to abandom the story. Good mix of characters and situations. Do like the prank on the Sorting Hat... Fleecy or Bounce? |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/2/2016 That's not magical history. That's magical battle tactics. If she talked about why they used that spell, why the sides where fighting, where they were fighting, how they were fighting, etc. Then it would be history. If she talked about why they were using those tactics (bit heavy for an eleven year old) then it would be history. Replaying them, becoming battle commanders and such is battle tactics. Sorry but you got Magical History wrong. Magical defense was great though, although it might be a bit pricy. But as a school you only have to pay it once... Unless a pensieve as a relative fast degeneration which would make the economical lifespan of the artifact ridiculous short. meh, nice concept either way. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2016 You fucked up the sorting with an old rusty spoon and a bucket full of tepid vanilla ice-cream. The sequence of events is a bit unbelievable. However I invoke the rule of funny. Thanks for making me laugh. And thanks for sharing this. |