Reading this for the first time. Can’t believe you put me thru this torture, but your writing skills are off the walls.

I like gaara x naruto better

please rewrite

There's no NejiNaru here after all. Thanks for not making this into deathfic.

A sequel, when you have killed off Naruto? How could you? I am just heart broken :(

Wow .. you really got a talent for the tragedy things. Even so, I think this is not really emotional because whenever I read Naruto's dead, I would at least shed a tear. But since I didn't this time, I think it was lacking something that I even don't know. Hehe sorry. I know you worked so hard for this, considering the complicated plots and the deceiving words. That's why, please continue your hard work and keep writing! Ganbatte! :)

Its hard to see abuse :( but I think it would make more sense if his guardian were Mizuki instead...

'I'm not going out with you.' :D Way to go Naruto-kun!

Did you really rewritten this? Please!
I want to know what happen!

Please can you make another story that naruto is hot and dangerous sasunaru

...How could you be so cruel to Naruto! ( No offense intended...) I cried after this chapter! Sasuke! You better realize that Naruto is the 3rd most precious person! ( next to Yaoi and the author who wrote this)

WTF..WHY TO MAKE A PERSON CRY

ok i dont get how sasuke would know it was naruto at school because u said he would use red hair dye when he changes to kyuubi, when sasuke sees "naruto" getting harassed by zaku he should still have red hair because he had just escorted sasuke as kyuubi... also this isnt the 1st time that sasuke had touched naruto's cheek, sasuke had touched his cheek when naruto feel asleep in sasuke's house for tutoring & he didnt say anything about cover ups

soo sad! i cried, when i was listening to already over - by red and reading he last chapter! im glad that naruto lived though , will read the sequel!

D: how could you make jiraiya the bad guy? but i do love this story