Reviews for Livin' Larger
Luna Lillyth chapter 16 . 2/7
I like this better than the canon episode, thank you for this.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 16 . 1/22/2019
So, when you came back to this story, I'd gotten out of the fandom. I knew I'd be back one day (ha! Here I am!), but I'm pretty sure I didn't review this.

NEW FANON (in this case) ACCEPTED! This is so much better than the original, it's unreal. I'm not saying that no effort went into the other one or that I don't understand (a whole heck of a lot better now than I did then), but it's still my least favorite episode of the entire series.

If I ever get any time on my hands, I may go through and illustrate it. That would be super fun. Bet I'd learn a lot...
Guest chapter 16 . 4/2/2017
nice!
Guitar Amateur chapter 16 . 10/20/2016
This was a lovely rewrite. An episode that I probably wouldn't have disliked if it had been like this!
ZoneRobotnik chapter 16 . 9/12/2016
Oh, this has been a really amazing story to read. Very intense, it makes me want to do my own version of Phantom Planet, only without him removing his powers fully, he uses the Fenton Ghostcatcher to take Phantom out of him and then hides Phantom from everyone because Masters' Blasters are on the hunt for any and all ghosts.

I actually felt so emotional for the robot's final line. Oh, such a sweet thing.
joggerwriting chapter 16 . 5/22/2016
Ok. It's been years since this story was completed, so it's also years of missed opportunity for me not reading this marvelous treat! (Granted, I'm also a new phan *shrugs*) Still, this is just too good to be true! The amount of details you put on planning, scene transition, and getting the tone right for the show is just truly truly amazing! I salute your incredible writing ability...

I've been rendered speechless.

But I tried to gather my wits in order to at least write a decent review, which surely will not compare to how much appreciation I wish to express for "Livin' Larger". So here's my thoughts:

The actions (especially the one at the end) are definitely more EPIC than the original. I mean, a house explosion? Certainly wasn't expecting that! But I was surprised in a good way though!

Character development is obviously superb. Weaving a good plot and simultaneously developing all the characters aren't easy, but you somehow managed to do both seamlessly.

I love Danny-bot and the humor he/it brings!

The original episode was much-criticized for dumping down Danny's character (for the sake of Sam's development, they said). I love how your rationale behind his behavior. It made more sense, with respect to Mr. Drop's work of course. This is officially my headcanon for the LL episode.

And it's no wonder that your writing talent has brought you places today! Congratulations on becoming a published author. I wish you luck in whatever you are working right now! :)
Emanon chapter 16 . 2/10/2015
Dude! That was awesome! I laughed so so hard when robot Danny asked can we please keep the robot? OMG I actually scared my roommate. lol I found this whole thing refreshing! not perfect but loads less anger inducing than the original Living Large episode. I am glad you remembered ta give credit to the episode writer. Even if it wasnt my favorite episode it wasnt my least favorite either. It still had good moments! which you proved by adding peace's and giving nods to through out your story. Props!
GhostAnn chapter 16 . 2/10/2015
Oh my gosh! This episode has always bothered me for many of the reasons you mention throughout. (especially the robo-friends and Danny's treatment of Tucker and Sam) but I love this rewrite. It has all the elements- and even leaves Danny with his frustrating "I could care less" attitude- but makes his attitude more believable. I know it wouldn't fit in a 30 minute episode. But this has eased a bit of the frustration and confusion brought on by the episode. I loved the idea of the episode and kinda understood what they were going for- but this feel so much more like Danny Phantom than the original episode did.
I don't know if you're reading reviews for this story anymore. sounds like you're off doing bigger better things. But if you do read this I don't think you have anything to be ashamed of. This was beautiful and overall pretty unique- even if you based it off an episode directly. If Mark Drop read this I bet he'd like it. If he doesn't than it would be for reasons I couldn't possibly fathom.
I bet he'd probably like to see the idea flushed out. As you said at one point in your notes the animators don't always get to go full out with their imaginations- limited to a specific time frame and deadline. So seeing it as a whole idea rather than a choppy concept shoved into a hastily developed episode would probably be cool? Maybe? I don't know... I'm rambling about things I couldn't possibly know... and you're probably thinking I'm wired and crazy... so I'll just leave with a quick thank you and abruptly stop talking.
Itexu chapter 16 . 9/21/2014
Loved it :)
bibliophilea chapter 16 . 4/1/2014
Even if it took you three years and you couldn't fit it all into a 22 minute episode, you still managed to take an episode that made me cringe because of how the characters were treated, and turn it into an episode that I thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for writing such brilliant Danny Phantom fan fiction! [::
cryptologicalMystic chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
Sirius Cybernetics Corporation?
XD Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy reference for the win!
Phyllis Joy Wolfe chapter 16 . 10/12/2011
Bwahahaha! Perfect ending! Brilliantly done! I applaud you! Well... not literally. That would be strange... and I think my family would stare... so yeah, metaphoric applause. That's alright, isn't it? _

Thanks for the good read! _

Phyllis
Phyllis Joy Wolfe chapter 15 . 10/12/2011
How perfectly Vlad to find some way to solve a problem that involves causing Danny pain. _
Phyllis Joy Wolfe chapter 13 . 10/12/2011
Sweet! I love the action. I'm really actually not much of an action person usually, (tend to be more interested in relationships) but this is AWESOME! _
Phyllis Joy Wolfe chapter 12 . 10/12/2011
Ha! Lovin' this! _ Course, I find more and more that I love just about anything dealing with Danny and Vlad. _
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