Reviews for Grief |
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diamondred chapter 2 . 11/8/2010 This was an amazing fic on 'Reckoning'. I loved how you captured Chloe's character so well, especially loved the comment about the 'igloo' :) Keep up the awesome writing! |
whatweareafreaidof chapter 2 . 7/6/2010 great story |
WaffleNinja chapter 2 . 9/3/2008 so loving! |
seventhprincess chapter 2 . 11/22/2007 What can i say? Just perfect! :) |
Spidey2 chapter 2 . 11/20/2007 love it! keep going! you're an excellent writer! want more like this!... |
JUJUChick16 chapter 2 . 11/19/2007 Not a bad story. |
cool-people-suck chapter 2 . 11/19/2007 aw This is perfect :D you have me convinced that it actually happened after Reckoning. great Chlark moment! |
FabulaEstActa chapter 2 . 11/18/2007 I love it. It carries just the right hint of sorrow and pain intermingled with hope. You got Chloe's characterization perfectly, a mix of serious concern with lighthearted banter. "It's not everyday a girl gets her own pet alien." And Clark's brooding was portrayed well. And your descriptions were simply superb: "The world around her felt frozen." "It could have een a beautiful day." "Let him grieve. Let him shed tears. Clark deserved that much." Finally, the plot itself was direct and plain, right to the point. No beating around the bush. It was extremely well-written and laid out for the reader. Nice job. |