Interesting look at George getting over Fred's death.

YEY! Another story form you! Your vampire one you wanted to get published was the best though... did you ever submit it?

ANYWAY! I like this one alot, you have good descriptive details. I like your syntax too. You seemed to rush through too fast though. Maybe spend a little more time describing the gnomes. I did like the background info we got on Alice as well. Added a nice aire of mystery to her. Overall, very good!

Aww that was cute. I liked it very much!

I really liked this story! x3