Update please

Kill yourself, virgin fag.

I quite literally finished this fic in less than twelve hours. I love everything about this fic from its character and plot development to the miniscule details here and there. I do hope you continue this

I'd give away my first-born if this story was finished. And my second. The format, premise, portrayal of the characters: it's all so unique and well done and Good.

this is an amazing fic. i was about to not read it when i saw the timestamps, but turns out the manga plot isn't very relevant to this. i love their characters. i love all three of them, and particularly in this last chapter, naruto. how he claimed to have gotten over his burdens when he was a kid, how he acknowledges moving on from the past is the best thing to do (even if he himself can't quite manage it yet). how sasuke and sakura are stuck in their self-centered bubbles, still drowning in their pasts. they struck a chord in me for personal reasons, but/and because of that, i love this story. knowing they should move on and doing it is worlds apart, of course, but at least naruto's already taken that step.

It's too much fun ! Lol !

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I absolutely adore this story, everything is amazing, the surprises, the plot twists, the development of the friendships, the relationships, the jinchuriki group, everything is fantastic.
I really hope you can continue this someday!
Bye!

I just finished reading this, and I have to say it's completely amazing. I haven't finished a chapter and yet I was already wanting to read the next one! Every single chapter was incredible, the surprises, the plot twists, I loved the reunion, the reencounter, I love the group of jinchuurikis too and I absolutely adore how you make them all have their own stories and secrets, their own fears and traumas and yet still be a group or team. I really wish you could continue this fantastic story!

Bye!

I honestly don't know what to think about this fic, on one hand I absolutely love it for the team 7ness and the strong character, and Konoha and other villages getting what is coming to them...but on the other hand, Sakura with her scars, Naruto with 2 fingers missing, and Sasuke with an eye patch, tsunade and jiraya dead, etc...this story is scarily realistic and not the fake stuff life *sakura miraculously having a limb saving jutsu, or naruto using Kyuubi to grow back is fingers*...I'm of 2 minds, but since i kinda want to know what happens later I think I'll follow this story.

Hi, just wanted to say that I thought that last chapter was gold. Ur a star :)

hi! I hope you didn't give up on this story. Even if you dont follow the original manga, I think it has a lot of potential. Im a sasunaru fan and I hate sakura, but in your story I surprised myself to think "SAKURA HOKAGE SAKURA HOKAGE!" xD See? better reaction to your sakura than the original. You seriously dont need to write all the events, but it would be cool to have a closure, at least for the peace of mind of the characters (and the fans, ok here is my selfish reason, my real motive...),

you can begin again by a ellipse, Naruto came back, he gives sasuke man-babies (ok its crazy, dont do it! xd but they can have angry make up sex, sasuke a weak moment with heart beating and blush and hide his face because he wants to stay a bastard, dont look at me Dobe! with Naruto who understands and be a man for them both and says I love you), Sakura makes allies and prepares to present herself eligible to be Hokage (yes i love your kickass sakura, Im her fan! .) angst/love with lee and sasuke and naruto meet them. Now they are together again, they defy politics and win. Sakura homage calls a meeting with the jonin of konoha, "lets get serious, Madara still is a menace. We got to make more allies to defeat him. It will be difficult but together we can take back our peace and our life!" Fire in the eyes of the jonin. The situation isn't the best but there is still hope. Naruto is proud that fate makes him meet his team and silently promise he will do all he can to protect them. Sasuke catches his expression and nods. They look at their friend Sakura, busy preparing their futur battles with the others jonins.

The end, Fans in tears and emotion

ok sorry for my bad english. I hope it wasn't too much boring, but I seriously think you can conclude this story in less than 5 chapter if you dont trouble yourself with Madara. Im sure Im not the one who wants to see it finish. Good story are not easy to find, a lot of AU (I dont hate them but ergh... too much high school fics, naruto or sasuke with female personality, THE HORROR! O.O), and not enough of stories in the narutoworld...and finally, I hope my comment will motivate you because Im sure a lot of Fans think the same than me: the ending of the original manga is too much disappointing (see? there is the perfect example of unfinished officially finished story...).

Please save the fans of this angst-y torment and help repopulate fan with completed good stories.

Your secret admirer

Thanks for sharing this story :)

This Story is so awesome. Seriously I love it. Since it have been more than 2 years I guess you will not finish it? I didn't find any information on your profil but if you could give me any hint I would be grateful?

I like NaruSasu better than SasuNaru, personally. :v

NaruSasu makes me happy. ./.