You both wrote it nicely. Keep it up guys :D

This is by far the best kurenaiXasuma fanfic I've ever read. So romantic and beautifully written. They are my favorite Konoha couple. Thanks for writing this! :D

THE BEST STORY I EVER READ!

Yeah, baby I think I'm gonna cry too! So nice!

That was so awsome ! i think this the best asuma x kurenai fan fic ive ever read and the intro's were funny as hell i hope you guy work together again , i even made this account just to comment this story !

That was very unique and enjoyable, the witty banter in between was quite amusing as well, This happens to be one of my favorite pairings and you both did such a good job congrates! *btw my boyfriend thanks you, the tie idea inspired us ;)*

Such a sweet story. Just what i need in my life at the moment. You are both great writers.

KAWAII!

_ Great Story! lol *fav* xD

Wow. That was so hot and you could definatley feel the love between the two. I was surprised when there weren't more fics with these two, but regardless this is one of the best M-rated romance stories I've read.

Not Bad!

Tease Tempt Tease play and then Tempt tease and well... give. :)

I liked it!

Nicely written!

who! had to take a cold shower very good job with this chapter! can't wait to read the last ;)

Michel Hazard, TwoTails, you two surely are amazing :]

xD

You're writing in your story is so detailed. I'm jealous ;;

And I love you're little side chats at the beginning and end of the stories. :]

Good job!

This is getting interesting! And hot!

Tempting once again!

Asuma and Kurenai, masters of destruction and seduction.

DAMN!

Cat crawl! Wot!

Sharp nails are somewhat good... and kinky!

Til the next chapter!

great..can wait for the next it up the good work.