| Reviews for Unconventional |
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   Esther Clemmens chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 I don't understand how you think you're not good at writing fight scenes... this was AWESOME! Please write more. |
| Lazy Daleface chapter 1 . 5/22/2011 creepin' 'round here and loving the fight scene. I don't even know how the hell anyone can pull off a fight scene, but it's pretty great the way you did it. :3 Anyway, back to the anime. XD 3 |
| br422ify chapter 1 . 2/26/2011 I LOVE IT PLEZ MAKE MORE |
| rocketfire23 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009 AWESOME! |
| MARY chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 COOL KEEP GOING |
| kathieclint chapter 1 . 4/2/2008 go erena g.t. rose! you rock! |
| Thornwitch chapter 1 . 3/31/2008 M, Chevalier sandwich... |
| Forlorn Maiden chapter 1 . 2/3/2008 Hehee. I love the last line. Ah if only it were so. |
| cristel sano chapter 1 . 12/26/2007 what do you mean your not good at writing fight scenes i'm a good writer and can tell you that that was amazing it felt like i was there in the mist of the fight oh ya... i like the haji and solomon jelsey thing and you are a good writer. |
| The Last Z Fighter chapter 1 . 12/7/2007 It was very well-written. The pacing, grammar and spelling seemed just about perfect(at least I didn't catch any). The story was an interesting fufilling read for its length. Just goes to show that it doesn't have to be novel length to be fufilling. Looking forward for future stories in this section. -The Last Z Fighter |
| anon chapter 1 . 12/1/2007 i think it was great! but the last sentence, was a little... ew! |
| Seawitch chapter 1 . 11/24/2007 I love the way you describe things; moonlight, the sky, and even the fight scenes. I think you did great. |
| littlestwolfling chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 Not very good with fighting scenes, you say? Ha. And, dare I laugh once more, ha ha /ha/. You're writing style, words, theme, and the like are all as close to perfection as any mere human is possible of obtaining. Might I add that I've also read your other one-shot, 'Orchestra of Three' and that, too, was simply wonderful. (Though, if I'm to praise it, I suppose I should be doing a reviewing under /that/ story in particular, and not this one. Hmm.) At any rate, I'm glad that you've written this, and I must ask, beseech you (I had a powerful urge to place a 'thee' right there, but I assumed that might make me seem all the more odd) to write much more under this devastatingly wonderful love-triangle, as you do so well at it. Until next time, my dear, please continue this marvelous work of yours. |
| ChasingStarlight chapter 1 . 11/17/2007 excellent. you should continue the story ;-) |
| iheartnurdz chapter 1 . 11/16/2007 Lovely. _ Great characterization, and I love the lush discriptions. |
