OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY HAPPY HOLIDAYS

It's so obvious that the person following them is Naruto. I don't even have to TRY to find out THAT one. But this is a great story, so LOVE IT! 3

Good story! I enjoyed it! :)

-Yvonne

Just a tip, "merry" is spelt marry. XD

one of the best stories

You made Gaara and Hinata disgustingly weak! Seriously, I don't think Hinata is a crybaby

nice chapter

Spell check its Marry not merry, you keep repeating the same mistake throughout the chapter

I'm currently reading chapter 14, but there are few things I wanna point out, 1) I don't think Tsunade has the power to send Gaara, a Kage to go on a mission for Leaf. 2) If it's okay for a Hokage to send ninjas from other village on a mission, why didn't she send Temari or Kankurou? 3) If there's no Genin around to send, there are other ninja in her own village, like Tenten, or Naruto. I know it's your story, and you control over how the story goes, but your plot has some holes. And your spellings.. but nvm, I won't say anything about it.

It's a good story btw :)

Awesome story and I hate you... XD why can't they keep their babyyyyyyyyy... T.T I get it I guess... That doesn't mean I like it... and if he grows up not knowing them I swear-! -sighs- I suppose I have to read the sequel then... IF ITS HORRIBLE I WILL PRETEND THIS STORY ENDED LAST CHAPTR AND GO INTO DENIAL!

Gaara you jerk! yOU IDIOT! *attempts to whack Gaara witha club*

So good so far...but just a small error Hizashi is Neji's dad Hiashi is Hinata's a**hole of a father

Naruto is so out of character it's not even funny.

Awesome! Best Story Ever!

HAHAHA OMG NARUTO THE STALKER! And your writing is pretty good too. Very believable events! Not a accidental kiss then blahblahblah right into the story. Yay!