‘Stay away from the mummy’...oh my gosh I have no idea why I find this so funny.

In fact, bandit and thief are unisex nouns... So Seto is in the wrong here.

yeah that's just plain wrong. Harry grew up cooking for the dursleys he's actually pretty good at it. you obviously didn't pick up on the details of the story. broad strokes, sure. small but important things, no.

You know I can’t help but that for some reason you hate Yami.

You know I think that you black fox character having just an easy time handing the god cards away was if you ask me just too easy. What I think you should have done well what you did do but that doesn’t mean the gods would cooperate that easily think what happened to Odion when he tried to use the counterfeit card that should happen unless Yugi hands them over and asks them to help.

Lol, Lord of the Rings! Nice origin story for the Dementers!

Right, right, I forgot about the whole "if they attack you first" part. Nice! And Snape got the tables turned on him, he is /not/ a happy camper.
Hello Millennium Items and Shadow magic - neither Light nor Dark.

Holy shit. Intense! I wonder how Snape will help out (obviously not explicitly). And how will Marik and Yugi figure out where Bakura went (first Knockturn Alley, then abducted). Neither have the Millenium Ring, could the Rod or Puzzle help locate Bakura?
Those wizards are /incredibly/ fortunate that Yami Bakura isn't up to snuff on his powers, otherwise, Shadow creatures would be summoned.

Such a struggle! Harry, Ron, and Hermione just get more and more suspicious but really, Bakura is just learning how to defend himself. Gotta love Kaiba giving fighting advice. Hoo boy, the trio doesn't know about Kaiba's own impressive defense skills now do they? LOL!

This is great! I'm really glad you included a reason for Dumbledore knowing about the late bloomers and getting them to Hogwarts. Sometimes when I read stuff I think "what about the local(ish) schools of magic?" I'm happy you included Dumbledore's side where he got that tip from the Green Dragon.
Love Kaiba's rationale: "If I figure out how it works, I can prove to the others they are delusional and its really just advanced science."

This was very entertaining. I loved it.

not the the pork!

On Cho's origin, considering the time that Harry goes to Hogwarts, I would bet that she is from Hong Kong, which would make her British-Chinese.

Okay, one mistake here, Mahad was not involved in the destruction of Kul Elna, and was one of Atem's bodyguards/friends at the time. He had no connection to the first seven wielders of the Millennium Items.

I do believe that you were the first to give Harry a Millennium Item, though you are far from the last. One author gave him the Ring, and I have given him the Scales.