| Reviews for These Lines I Wear Around My Wrists |
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Shiffer takuta chapter 10 . 10/27/2011 Omg! Why dont u continue? The way you say what is happenin is amazing! Continue. |
Akuma-Heika chapter 2 . 10/23/2011 Also somehting I forgot to mention last chapter. The Dead Seal was unique to the Yondaime Hokage and besides the Third the only one who could know it would have been Jiriya sso how did the father know? |
Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 What's with the weird chapter numberings? Also I really like these stories of yours around Yugito. A question though could you write one where she meets with Naruto and the effect he has on her. NaruKumo stories have been done before as well as stories where they both desert etc etc. but with your skill with words I believe it would be truly unique or at the very least great works of art. I will be adding you on my list of great writers. |
silver-eyed chapter 10 . 12/30/2008 oh, that's so sweet of her and thoughtful too! hopefully her brother becomes her friend! yay for the update as well, it's been awhile. anyway, keep it up! XD |
012345678901234567890123456789 chapter 10 . 12/29/2008 You make Yugito amazing, did you know that? To be perfectly honest, your characterization of Yugito in this work and (NBM) is absolutely fantastic! Why it has so few reviews, I will never know. Your writing style is good, but it is your plot, and your ideas that are really captivating. Since there's so little canon information on Yugito, it makes her a very flexible character and you seem to be making the most of it. To be honest, I think you should switch from drabbles and outright write a Yugito-centric story. I'm usually more of a Naruto-centric story fan, or at least Naruto-has-a-major-role-in-relation-to-the-main-character fan, but I can really see a multi-chapter Yugito-centric fanfiction popping up. Great work. Keep updating (and hopefully soon!) |
Missy chapter 9 . 12/2/2008 Please,please,please many of your stories are good and usually make me cry,and feel a flurry of soo good!Please update soon! |
accountkiller443245 chapter 9 . 9/11/2008 Good work. Cant wait for the next chapter. The chapters are a bit short, lengthening them might be a good idea. |
Aisuru2 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008 I thought Yugito was sealed when she was much older. Didn't you say in NBM that after she was sealed, the Nekomata took her over and killed seven people? Plus I thought she was taken back to live with her mother initially? I thought she was older than a baby because she mentions how her mother used to give her drinks for her sore throat and play games with her, implying that she was much older than an infant. |
silver-eyed chapter 9 . 7/28/2008 oh, what's she got in mind? i hope the little girl gets some friends, even if it's just one more other than kumiko! keep it up! |
silver-eyed chapter 8 . 3/10/2008 stupid teacher, that's really heartbreaking to read. anyway, keep it up! |
blackscarlet562 chapter 8 . 3/7/2008 omg...that is so mean. |
Vellor The Ancient chapter 7 . 2/13/2008 This is horribly sad, but I love it. Good job. |
silver-eyed chapter 7 . 1/27/2008 very good writing, i feel so bad for the little girl! her time in the academy's not going to be too pleasant either, is it? hmm, hope she bonds with kumiko like naruto to iruka. looking forward to more! |
crazyfoxdemon chapter 7 . 1/25/2008 this story is kinda depressing. but i love it anyway. who are you gonna pair yugito with? please be naruto. please. i hope you update soon. |
blackscarlet562 chapter 7 . 1/25/2008 aww...so sad... |