The story is Beautiful and inspiring. I hope that Harry and Legolas never end up together

OH my god you evil you made me cry and why did Harry had do suffer so!

Ok that was just really mean why can't Harry have a happy love please tell me he will have love please

I love how realistic this is; the multiple love cycles as well as how you didnt make Harry into this bitter type of person as he did not get what he wanted but he had accepted it.

You did not get the right characterization. It's so so so off.

It was great !

As in mobile it does not show the presentation summary once you start reading, i was dissapointed that after all this cat and mouse game and forshadowing, Harry and Legolas didnt end up together. Then again I didnt much like Legolas here, maybe because there were only so muh space that he always came out in those important times like an idiot. I hope Eomer couldve been the one for Harry. He was a man and passionate.
The sad endings are dissapointing bc hardly ever they feel satisfactory. Like here, Harry didnt really feel healed nor happy and fading made him seem weak.

Nicely done! I like the humour Harry possesses and invokes in others throughout the story. I personally think his death was appropriate. If he ended up with Legolas, it would have felt too cookie-cutter-esque.

I thought that it was a brilliant ending. Bcs honestly they didn't really work, Legolas still loved Aragon even when Harry was fading. And I hate stories where one loved becomes a second choice!

Wonderful story! I am not a huge fan of bittersweet endings like this, but your reasons are very sound.
I liked the ending. Endings, in my opinion, are the hardest part of a story because you have to wrap things up properly, but you don't want to choke off any future ideas. I found your ending very nice, few authors, published or not, have that touch. In fact, of all the books I've read, I could probably count on two hands how many stories have a neater ending, that's saying something.
One thing that seemed unrealistic to me, is that really changed. I didn't really understand if Theoden died or not, but Harry's prescence would have changed things, especially since he was part of the quest.

Such a tragic love story. I loved it so much that I cried!

I totally loved this!

Lol 'does Rivendell ring a bell' that rhyme was hilarious!

OK so I read this and let me say you are a awesome written! It so felt like a longer story because of the amazing way you put this together! I would love to read about Harry's second chance! Would he get the love of his est friend the way he wanted?

that was exceedingly beautiful and utterly heartbreaking. I'm glad I found this fic, thank you for writing it :)