| Reviews for Interlude |
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   Miss Meggie chapter 12 . 3/25/2009 you do really fine job of capturing tim i loved it! |
| 2thebitterend chapter 12 . 3/17/2009 Tim doesn't need dialouge...his facial expressions speak volumes! Love the story, can't wait to read some more! |
| Camilla chapter 12 . 2/21/2009 i now have the fantastic mental picture of Tami looking at thw two of them with this look of utter exasperation on her face. and i liked the lack of Tim speaking- it fits with him not being the most verbose person in the world. |
| JelliBeen chapter 11 . 1/17/2009 "because 33 had been handed the world and he wasn’t about to hand it back." Seriously that just was..*thud*... I loved the update! |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 7 . 1/10/2009 I loved this one. Serioulsy funny I could see his face sitting on the back of his truck. I so don't feel a bit sorry for him! Kia |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 6 . 1/10/2009 That confused me a bit but I'm sure it will get better. Kia |
| micropop chapter 10 . 1/4/2009 Great to see that you are updating on all your FNL stories! I took the opportuinty to re-read the whole thing and it's a really good story. Can't wait to read the final chapter! And, as always, I love the way you write, but I feel like I've said that about a million times by now ;-) |
| saderia chapter 10 . 1/3/2009 Great chapter. Saderia |
| Little Lost Penny chapter 9 . 10/27/2008 Great story! Tim's just so in character keep on! |
| oneoflifeslollopers chapter 9 . 9/15/2008 oh i'd forgotten how much i loved the coach...he's the best. and it makes me want to watch friday night lights again, which i don't think ive done since about easter at the latest, shocking really how fast time flies. but i just wanna go up and hug tim and the coach cos they have such a cute relationship :) and tims so cute when he likes julie. |
| barelybreathing chapter 9 . 8/29/2008 please update soon... i'm dying to know hat is going to happen... thanks so much... |
| SweetMagnolia chapter 9 . 8/24/2008 I just read all 9 chapters. Fantastic. I love your characterization of Tim. I think it's spot on. I truly love reading the budding relationship with Coach's daughter from his perspective. I think it would be obvious why Julie would develop an attraction towards Tim and that's why I appreciate your story because you took his attraction (that really is a blank slate) and developed it in a way that is driven by his character and is true to it. I appreciate it. I also really enjoy your prose. It can sometimes be a little confusing, but I just stop and reread it which honestly helps your words hit more powerfully. Good job and keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next update! |
| kg5307 chapter 9 . 8/6/2008 Classic, absolutely classic. This is exactly how that conversation would go down between them. |
| three2raise chapter 9 . 8/6/2008 I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! You wrote both characters so well! (Although I wonder if Coach would ever give Tim permission to date his daughter.) And all Tim said was "Coach"! It was great! Can't wait for Julie to find out & the dinner chapter! |
| wrenbailey chapter 9 . 8/6/2008 and this is so worth reading! |
