I love this! You write the characters so well! I've loved the story up to this point and am excited to possibly see more! I'm keeping an eye out for updates ;)

Wonderful witty & clever dialogue just made this story a win from the very first word to the end. :D

This is too funny. :D Loved how all the food seemed to end up in Don, even the stuff he claimed he didn't like.

Very nicely done! Thank you for the laugh.

I enjoyed the part about Charlie declaring that Don the FBI agent was going to be proctor and has eagle eyes! I needed a good laugh this morning...Thank you!

Oh...this is so good! I love how everytime Charlie turned around to look for his food...it was gone! And how Don did manage to make him a tuna salad "sandwich" but then ate that too...and had the nerve to make a comment about his brother stealing his beer! Too Funny!

I love this! This is so much fun to read! I have moved the chips away...heeding your warning!

Thank you for sharing this story with us!

that was hilarious loved it

Gee, I wonder why? This was hilarious, its a good thing I'm at the library. Nice work.

Hmm. I wonder why Donny's not hungry. (note the sarcasm) lol. I love it.

"For some reason, I'm not hungry." lol. Now i wonder why that would be. Good story.

I'm okay with food being pilfered from a sibling. But I draw the line at pickle theft.

Chips, fine. Sandwich, I'll deal. Lasagna? All yours. But a dill spear? That's just cruel!

I love your drabbles. They never fail to make me smile. And of course, now I'm cravin' pickles!

LOL!

Perfect ending. Now he's not hungry. Silly, Don. Charlie you keep falling asleep like that and who knows where you'll wake up next time. :) Great one, Jels.

Don Eppes passing up on a steak supper? He must finally be full.

And Charlie sleeping through all of the packing and traveling was adorable.

Thanks for sharing such an enjoyable series that was genuinely fun to read.