My heart hurts

Good job

DAMN! Them feels though... I like it. I feel back for ichi though

okay...I see, you and the other great writer of this likes tragic ending and...more importantly, making me cry TT Waahh...How come Ichigo has to die in both(this one and the fanfic entitled "Pass on the Number") stories by the hands of his own father? That's just sad...really really really really sad...:(

Anyway I like how you described the scenes... It's really vivid :D I like it!

Depressing, but I like it. Good job.

Oh hell...
This is incredible. I'm absolutely speechless.
I hated dark stories before now but this one...blew me away.

Holeee crap...

I gotta say that you make the best dark stories

Beautiful. Horrifying. Tragic and so very, very painful.

...omg ichigo...
This story is so dark...I LOVE IT:3

omg i just cried this was so good

OMG thats sad... so sad .-.

Dam good story, I rarley find good ones about ichigo suffering, Thanks i finnaly got it ! Also im very thankful it was not yaoi I hate yaoi. well i hope uall finish!

A powerful, frightening and beautiful piece.

That...that was... Waaaaaaaaaahhhhh! Ichi! Poor Ichi awwww! Even though shiro is my fav character this was too much! U really made it seem real and this is the first fanfic that actually made me cry and feel connected! Great job! Ichi! ;(

y-you! how? HOW! i dont feel anything when i read fanfics! BUT YOU! you made me shed a single tear! how dare you make me feel! oh poor ichi its so sad... just ... ah... ... .