Great Ai Yori Aoshi crossover mainly with Iron Man and you've pulled it off quite well so far.

Actually the power mess-up kind of annoyed me, I wouldn't have minded it so much if Jen, Wanda, Peter, and Greer got their originl powers returned. Also, just because you haven't updated something in a while is no read to make a chapter crazy, I wish you didn't give up the mainstream story, this one kind of got too nuts for me.

AI YORI AOSHI RULES ALL this is neat impatiently waiting for more

Okay, that was a surprise. So the girls now get powers of their own. I can imagine Miyabi as She-Hulk, but Aoi as Tigra? Whoa. Then Takeo's clumsiness kicks in and makes an even bigger mess (thanks to Scarlet Witch's powers) ? LOL!

THIS IS SOO GOOD! Hm... I kinda think you should have KAoru tell the girls and have them wear the armor too! likw they each get a pacific one? It's just a thought, but i hope u use it!

Nice! please update soon. and also this does kinda fit in with thee Secret invasion aftermath...

Why do I get the feeling this is going to turn into a kind of "Iron Harem"?

I can't wait for the next chapter

I like this, I was a Marvel Comics fan growing up. Hope to read more soon.

DUDE, KEEP WRITING THIS FRIGGIN' STORY, DO NOT STOP!

Dude, Iron Man's the SHIT, Ai Yori Aoshi's incredible... together... wow.

Nicely done...I think that you are writting some truely new cross-over fiction here, and hope you keep up with it. I just realized something though. Kietaro from Love Hina has the same healling factor as Wolverine. I think that x-over would work. Now on to the rest of the review...Your structuring is spot on. You have no plot scattering in evident yet that I can see, and your story reads as being drafted a couple of times. which just makes it better presented than about half of the stories on this site. Well done. Good read, and update soon please.

This is really cool! It is gonna be an interesting read. I hope you are still working on this. The situation is such that Kaoru as Iron Man gives thought of perhapse Kitaro Urashima as a new Wolverine. Well done start, and good flow to the plot line too. I found good balance between forground/Background. Good job..On to the next chappie.

This was great. I really digged all those different Iron Man armors.

One of my favorites was the War Machine one.

Though they're all equally cool.

And what a concept of this Iron Man Legion.

And I really like where I think Kaoru is going with his armor questions for HOMER.

Please keep up this great adventure.

This is awesome. I've been an Iron Man for some time. I'm a big fan of high-tech-superhero-tech.

Still am even with Tony being how he's been recently and nowadays.

I find it so cool that Kaoru's become the CEO of the Asian branches of Stark Enterprises.

And to think this may be leading to him becoming a new Iron Man.

What a cool concept.

keep WRiting!