Reviews for Hokage To Be
Guest chapter 8 . 5/22
More please!
QueenDeadPool chapter 1 . 4/16
This was a start to something really good. Wish there was more.
LB Cat chapter 8 . 4/14
Enjoyed reading this. Thanks
InfernalzRush chapter 8 . 4/9
I'm sad that this hasn't been updated in like 12 years. Hope it gets updated, cause I want to know what happens next!
Some dude chapter 8 . 3/1
Please update
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4
Sorry this decision to not use large bunshin is fucking retarded. Author has questionable intelligence.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/23/2019
Moar please!
gabelou1991 chapter 5 . 6/27/2019
Naruto oublié qu'un ninja n'a pas d'honneur et qu'il n'y a pas de tricherie.
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 6/27/2019
Pourquoi cela n'a pas été faite canon
MysticRising chapter 8 . 5/30/2019
NOOOO! NO UPDATES! NO UPDATES! THIS IS SO GOOD! The characters were written well (i hope hinata gets trained by tsunade too, cause in canon she was too weak), the sakura and sasuke bashing went well, and naruto showed his intelligence. Just as we are about to see some growth in sakura you left us. Fuck.
saying.whatever.i.want.to chapter 8 . 5/21/2019
moarr
Currahee506 chapter 8 . 2/13/2019
Update
Guest chapter 8 . 12/17/2018
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY IS AMAZING PLEASE DONT LEAVE IT UNFINISHED IM BEGGING YOU
Arsenal chapter 8 . 8/16/2018
Boring. Run of the mill. There is no single original idea in this chapter. Everything has been done before.
Arsenal chapter 5 . 8/16/2018
"But using them to learn a jutsu seemed too much like cheating. Ninja spent days, weeks, months to master their jutsus, and using his clones seemed like a slap in the face to all of those hardworking shinobi's. So Naruto made a promise to himself. He would never use his clones to master a jutsu, unless it was absolutely necessary."

Really? I mean really? That's the lamest and most inane excuse I've seen an author make for fear of an overpowered Naruto. This is the kid who is going to have to go against Pein, Madara, and Kaguya. He does need the power up. Itachi was jonin at his age. Now that's what being overpowered. At least make him chunin level from the get go.

If I wanted a fanfic where Naruto is weak and dumb I'd just watch the anime.
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