| Reviews for Breaking Dawn |
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   CPZ899 chapter 15 . 10/3/2010 This story... l just cant belive it. If breaking dawn never came out, this would be it. I do have an ldea. Bellas gift could be showing thoughts like renesmee, but because she isnt in this story, she could have the power instead. This Story and u are in my faves. Check out my story! THE ONLY thing that really sucks is that l cant write my story from my phone, only computer... keep up the good work! |
| IWantAnEdwardCullen chapter 4 . 3/24/2009 Sorry, but I couldn't even get past this part - "I loved Edward. I loved him with all my soul and my being and everything. But Jacob still knew, and I think I did too, that a little bit of my heart belonged to him." It's laughable, even in fanfiction. |
| alicedear chapter 1 . 12/17/2008 its good |
| edwardsgirl1117 chapter 15 . 8/11/2008 that is really good! keep writeing! |
| aeroXangg chapter 2 . 8/7/2008 good job! |
| TodaysSorrowTomorrowsRevenge chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 lovv itt |
| annmarie chapter 15 . 7/18/2008 please please write more u are doing great and i love the story |
| bbeellaa chapter 15 . 7/2/2008 great! |
| bbeellaa chapter 5 . 7/2/2008 do u live in qld? omg i live in sydney! anyways the story is GREAT |
| smartywitch chapter 15 . 7/1/2008 please update again soon - i love your story its really well-written and i am so happy that you are not doing another oneof hose bella-gets-pregnant stories, because those are dumb. |
| Nancy chapter 15 . 6/18/2008 Please please please update! Dying here! |
| AloysiusJo chapter 15 . 6/15/2008 AWESOME Keep writing though otherwise ill go crazy... i think that you are an amazing writer and should keep writing this story, also hurry up! |
| fictitious facades chapter 15 . 5/31/2008 oh my. i love this. i just read it all addictedly. so update super soon? please? |
| story.teller1992 chapter 15 . 5/26/2008 This was really good. Probably one of the best Breaking Dawn fanfics I've read, and I've read a lot of them. I can't wait to see how the story plays out. kudos, I'll be waiting for more! |
| Billy Bob Bo Jangles chapter 15 . 5/22/2008 Considering all things, the story was actually quite good. I do admit that I wanted to retch at some points and run away laughing at others. But why Alaska? Why not an friggin' Ivy League school? Emotional brakdown - very good idea. Though, I thought the smell of animal blood disgusts the vampires. They technically aren't "YAY! ANIMAL BLOOD!" I suppose you haven't read the food analogy of Stephenie Meyer, so I'll just give you a briefing. To the Cullens, human blood is all your favorite foods. i.e. chocolate, etc. Animal blood is like your least favorite foods, which, for me is something really bitter. Then you have to imagine the chocolate and bitter thingie side by side. Which one would I grab up? The chocolate side! But the Cullens have to feed off the bitter thingie day after day, week after week, year after year, etc. |
