| Reviews for Get Lucky |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 2/3/2018 I love your fanfiction it’s awemzing ( not sure if that’s a word) Your the best please keep going with the story. Thx |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/25/2016 That was amazing |
 alexanaxela chapter 10 . 2/25/2013 it's a nice short story, but i cant help but feel the last the chapters were just tacked in |
| Super Pan-chan chapter 1 . 9/5/2012 Me like this a whole lot7 |
| withoutwingsx chapter 11 . 5/23/2012 Atleast it ends happy! Yay! |
| izabel chapter 7 . 2/5/2011 How could Pan be a virgin if you described her being raped, twice? |
| Dever101 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 I know you were good but this kinda bluw my mind stop making good stories or ill be brain dead |
| Trunks Hazel eyed Assassin chapter 7 . 7/3/2009 Very good lemon considering it's only your second one. You wrote it like a pro.I like the story, great job. |
| tetisheri chapter 10 . 6/9/2009 awesome story at first i thought pan died. i loved it! |
| TheCritic18 chapter 2 . 5/15/2009 ... I've decided to not continue further, I should go find a older story thats written just like this one and read it.. 0/5 |
| TheCritic18 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009 Unfortunately, I have nothing good to say about your story. For starters, the beginning sounds like one big cliche- I could probably find another story with almost an identical beginning, very un-original for a beginning chapter and disappointing. The writing is okay (hopefully it will improve in further chapters), and your format is decent. 2/5 |
| frikinchikin18 chapter 10 . 5/10/2009 this was a really really nice story! it was so different and ive never found a story yet that has a storyline like this one! pan and trunks are finally together! yay and ryan dat crazy dude is gone! haha. but this chapter it was a little confusing it wuz lik pan is poisoned and trunks becomes unconscious and i didnt no if they were bak yet or on the plane til later cuz it mentioned if vegeta new anytin cuz she was sayan. so ya...but i got it eventually. overall this was an ABSOLUTELY GREAT story!gud job! |
| frikinchikin18 chapter 3 . 5/10/2009 oh! datz gud! u had goten b da one to find her! and then dat ryan is such a perv! but datz gud u had goten b da one to find her, not trunks or else dat wud b lik evry other au. datz y i lik urs so much! cuz itz so different! |
| frikinchikin18 chapter 1 . 5/10/2009 oh wow! this is a hole different thing ive never seen a story lik this one! its a good ting! lik pan goin all goth and stuff and then the lines of a poem song thing in between! wow this is totally different in a gud way! |
| tanya2byour21 chapter 12 . 5/6/2009 This was a good story and I loved it. Tanya |
