i have nothing to say but this REALLY is a sad story. making me cry all the time. ill tell u when i saw edgeworth, then mia, then lips i was like ZO MEH GAWD! but i read it so yeah... (im strange like that...)

*am reading and writing at the same time* :)

Be careful with your spelling. At some point, you wrote 'exited' instead of 'excited'. Mia's not known to make spelling mistakes, now does she? :)

"Clear her dead"? Ouch, you need to be more careful. Head, you meant, right?

Diego Armando...gosh, he. Is. So. In. Character. GREAT WORK. XD

Everyone is, actually. You've got Mia's 'easily flustered yet willing to prove herself' personality down very very well.

"I walk to work." Yep, an accurate depiction. I can't imagine Mia owning a car when she first starts out as a freshman at the law offices. Especially since according to Phoenix in case 2, she was never good with electronic stuff.

A nice start! I shall read more! ;)

There are a few grammatical errors, but I loved it anyway!

The last part made me cry. ;_;

Granted the grammar could use work, but the story was incredible! I almsot cried... *sniff*.

good story, but you made a few spelling and grammar mistakes. 'heals' should be 'heels' when referring to a noun. you misused the different kinds of 'your, you're, etc.' those are a few things to work on, but it is a wonderful story otherwise!

I absolutely loved your story! It was so beautifully written, and I cried (for once). Thanks for writing this wonderful fic, its going on my favorites list!

Jenni:)

It's amazing so far! I'm at school and the bell is about to ring so I can't read anymore yet, but I'm going to tonight! I LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING, ALTHOUGH I KNOW THERE ARE FOUR CHAPTERS, I LOVE IT! THIS IS MY FAVE PAIRING AND YOU'RE GIVING ME A GREAT BACK STORY, THANK YOU!

OH MAI GAH! MORE ROMANCE!

In in the end... Diego died. I swear, I cried a little bit.

Aw! This is my favourite story...!~~

I wish it didn't have to end... but thats okay.

No errors... I think!~

This is still my favourite story.

You have inspired me to write my own fics. Son maybe I will have some.

Thank you for the awesome story!

For the final time, once again, -CHAN.

Two words. Definate romance!

I loved this chapter. I think this is my favourite... _

And... however... I did see some spelling mistakes... but only in one word. You mixed up the words 'trial' and 'trail' But not too much.

I still love this one. Keep writing!

Greatest yet.

-CHAN.

Ha...! Another great chapter.

How did you come up with the idea? This must've taken quite awhile...

It was a cliffhanger. Awesome job on that. I thought they were going to lose for a minute, there!

Still, I saw no errors in the script.

I hope the next chapter is just as good, if not better.~

B -CHAN.

Wow! This is a great story so far!

Heehee!~ I read this whole story, but I should review other chapters first.

Okay, this is by far the best diego/Mia story I have ever read. It is so romantic.

I didn't see any spelling mistakes here, either... _

Keep doing wht you're doing!

-CHAN.

great fic.. some of the parts seemed a little to vague or fast paced, but at least in one case, that being case 4 of the game, I do understand that re-writing it wouldve taken quite a lot of time and not to mention been hell of boring haha.

I love the fact you wrote a Mia/Diego fic, therere not a lot of these around (and Im sure hoping to see more hehe). I think youve portrayed them pretty well, though I gotta say the ending was rather vague... especially cause Diego/Godot was on death row, so it just seemed weird to me that hed promise to "live his life to the fullest"... but either way, I gotta admit that those last sentences of the story made quite an impression on me hehe.

rock on, write more. )

aw...

i love diego X mia fluff...

really well written; thank you for posting this!

Wow... I love the ending. I love this story, I bet you this is how it really happened. It made me tear at the end, you know!

Oh I love this couple ~

Hikari: WHA! Yami: -raises hand- Am i the only one who thought that whenever Mia possessed Maya or Pearl Diego/Godot got realy upset. You know, cause that was his girlfriend and everything and he couldn't eve say hi! Toitsu: You also commented on how he must have liked the view. Yami:-cough cough- Toitsu: A truely beautiful ending if I do say so myself. The whole meeting was wonderful, the poisoning, spectacular. This truely was a great story, I am very happy that you wrote it, thank you. Hikari: -still crying-thank you! Yami:-still coughing(sick)-Thank you!