Holy crap your alive! That was awesome!

Hey, I know this is probably a dead fic, but I just want to say that I love reading this story, and re-reading it. You do so well with the characters and the story and I love how you have interpreted them. This is a fantastic fic, and even if it never gets another chapter, I hope that you know that that what you have done has been fantastic and it always made my day to read it. All the best, and happy writing!

Aww slag. Cranky Inventor Terror Twins Everyone is deactivated.

This story was a delight to read. Hardly any grammar wise mistakes or spelling errors, which can make or break a story. But, the characters are what really made this wonderful. Wheeljack is my favorite character, so when I saw your fic, I jumped at the chance to read it and I don't regret it. Your Wheeljack is one of the more grim (and cranky) takes I have seen of him, which is pulled off beautifully. Plus, I just love what you have done with the 4-Beta idea.

Thank you for sharing this story and your talents. I truly hope that you haven't abandoned this story for the shelves of Never Completed as this is a story that should never suffer that kind of fate. Anyway, have a nice day! :)

I am delighted that this has updated. Excellent story.

God, I re-read the whole thing in one gobble. As always, love your take on Wheeljack/Sunstreaker/Sideswide/Ratchet.

Hoping for more.

-Q

Oh, this is good. Like, really really good. And you've stuck with it for about 7 years? I have very much enjoyed this so far, and am crossing my fingers, hoping for more. But regardless, Silverbolt is awesome. Grimlock is awesome. And Wheeljack is totally awesome! (Especially how you write them :)

This is the second time I'm reading this story. Its very good. Detailed writing and I love the way your handling the characters.

update

im so glad youre back

I don't even have words for how happy I am to see this is still kicking! I love seeing this universe through your take on it. There are so many cultural details that the characters, of course, take for granted, which add a richness and depth I could revel in for ages.

Wow is that a terrible ending. Good grief. Got to update soon.

Oooo! Grimlock is awesome! And I'm very interested to see how your Skyfire thinks. Great chapter! Great action and great emotion.

So excited to have an update! And wow, what an update to be sure ) The twins vs Grimlock - I get a kick out of how he got named! Wheeljack is really outdoing himself this time...interesting twist to see Skyfire enter the stage like this. Poor autobot seekers all hiding on the roof!

Eeeee! New update! Absolutely blew through it - very excited to see where you'll take this. Also, great interaction between Sideswipe and Grimlock!

-Q