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So why didnt he even bother asking the commander if she arrived too?

And fuck you for not putting Hinata with him. YOU SUCK! ... you also made him angry at his dad only for him to cry instead...*clap clap* worst idea ever... see ya and this stupid story around

Well this overall was really good, but it was hard to read in some areas. I wish you had finished it.

BURN IN HELL jk lol

This was probably one of the most annoying as hell stories I've read. Grammar was bad, the story idea was horrible, that and finally you have one fucked up mind to come up with this. And now that's done you should actually put consideration for your readers rather than selfishly doing so for yourself which then will lead to your own readers just up and leaving once they get the idea you just up and made on the go. Which none of them were good here. Now I take my leave cya.

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good story great mix with Filipino language and damn funny on them

not rush very self explanatory its cement the theme every chapter romance nice and good plot

damn its dead I hope to continue this story great one thou

Nice story . . Next chap please its getting interesting and exciting :)
Please update really really soooooon :)

i noticed hinata wasn't in the soul society...this leads me to two conclusions. 1. she is a hallow/visord or 2. she is his zanpaukto. she can't be in the town outside the soul society shes to powerful for that. i shall look forward to seeing what hapens.

Oh sO I hAvE To WaIt how long now?

Interesting. So in a way hikaru is the the embodiment of insanity. How... trouble some.

Love your work, can't wait for more :)

I think it's a good amount of sad. Not enough to cry but enough to be depressed.

I like the story and everything but the lovey dovey stuff is starting to annoy me its a really good story though

with the perfect insanity, so comes Juubi no Okami, otherwise known as SAMSARA THE WORLD GOD TREE and THE ORIGINAL BIJUU!