Wow, this is perfect! Totally what I'd imagine Ayame's thoughts and feelings regarding Kouga, Kagome and InuYasha would be. You hit these characters core relationships super spot-on! Lovely fic! Awesome one shot, great job!

NICE!

I like this oneshot :D it made Ayame seem more mature than the anime credit her to be (i never read the manga) :D

it's sad that they werent together in this,but i still liked it and thought it was really good. i didnt see n errors, but i suck at commas so i dont no.

NICE! :D U better write more...OR ELSE...T_T'

great story! i thought that way when watching the anime too! great job!

WOOT GO ON SOON KAY! I LUFFED IT! Byez

~~Luff the one and only Ashes kamie~~

How could you hate InuYasha? When did you ever watch it? Also, no new episodes were, or are going to be made. Ayame was only in those two episodes...

What doesn -kun means?

The pervert in you? Where did that come from? Are you talking about the hot springs thing you were going to put or something?

-Kikinu