omg i love this story! please contiue it and dont leave the world hangin

awesome story, can't wait to read more

Good job. I am really enjoying it so far.

Hmm... you mentioned something earlier about Raoul's daughters... are they going to be playing a part in the story? Great job, btw...

Nice! very nice! Whoa i'm the, like, 5th review today alone! that rocks! keep on writing!

Wow! great job, again! it's nice to see a new story thats just a bit different, but close enough to the originals to be enjoyable. Keep up the good work!

Very, very nice with the letter to Daine and Numair. But how the heck does Alanna think she's gonna keep Sarralyn hidden while she trains? Argh, I just have to keep reading, dont I? yeah... ok! next!

Hey Rei! What's up with Numair? Why's he being such an ass to Sarralyn? And whats with all this "destiny" talk? I cant wait for more!

WOOT! Another good chappie! Just so you know, I'm gonna update on every chapter since I've been missing out since now... Anyway, it is Faithful that's talking to Alanna, right? Just making sure... Onto chap 3!

Wow! Ok, I just got reccomended this story by a friend, and it's really good! Great job!

Another good story. They seem to be springing up like daisies.

And they are all unique.

Keep it up

lol you're welcome! i got a little bit confused, but still loved the chappie!1 lol hm emmett..topaz...am i seeing a connection here? lololol or am i just crazily obsessed? lololol ~ama

poor Zane...

lol.. what shall happen...

im loving this.. can't wait for more..

Ooh what an interesting idea (about the sight)

Please continue soon.

And all your hints about destiny are making me want to pull my hair!

I love this...the story is so easy to get tangled up in and I have to smile to think of its originality. I've never read anything that sounded quite like it.