Holy shit.
Just.
Like.
Everything.
Omg holy shit everything just, I have no words
Amazing

I knew as soon as he said Marve was amnesiac

Oh i forgot something!
-Why is skeeter alloud to write all that nonsens. Even disregarding that why don't his friends and more over hermione do anything agains those articules of lies.
-Ron head auror really? that lazy bumb.
-Why is harry contacting ron first instead of hermione who really can help him.

Great story but very confusing. And had to think of an alternative universe just to accept some things.
-Umbitch isn't that smart to do all of this.
-At least now we now about ginny's fate, i really thought it weird just 3 days.
-Very confused about suddenly out of nowhere comes the talk between h/hr liking each other and more.
-Without harry it's just not possible hermione and ron would become friends.

Why would Ginny kill herself after only three days?

So, what did he eat?

Finally finished reading this. Sorry for not reviewing more chapters but I read most of this whilst sick and I find it difficult to review when I'm sick. (But I wanted to give a final review of my thoughts on this story.)

Firstly, it's REALLY REALLY good. The first chapter hooked me in immediately, followed by the next few chapters which built on the premise. I couldn't stop reading, it was really interesting. And even before that, the summary and title drew me in as well. The idea is SO interesting and I was on the edge of my seat wondering what was going on/going to happen. Your writing style is lovely, I loved the descriptions in the flashbacks between Hermione and Harry, and everywhere else as well. The descriptions are really haunting to read at times (like the pebbles at the beach, and Harry at the lake, after committing suicide etc). Your writing style is perfect for mystery/angsty stories like these and it's really lovely. Though tbh I felt at some parts it was a bit rushed, especially in terms of flow and description. Like you focussed more on the plot and describing things relevant to that, but left out some connecting description, so maybe flesh it out a little more for future stories?

I have to admit though. I was a bit disappointed with the ending, but the story was still great overall. I didn't like the Travelor and Fate because they're very out of canon elements, and I felt cheated that the main conflict of this story (Harry finding himself alone in the wizarding world with no human near him) was resolved by completely by out of canon creations. I would have preferred a more in canon explanation.

The reason for Voldemort coming back was kind of...rash? I still can't make full sense of it, and a lot of the finer details towards the end didn't really make a lot of sense. The ending is also a little open-ended. Now that Luna is reporting Harry and 'Marve's case to the Department of Mysteries, if they did more investigations, won't it open up their memories/open up the connection between them and start it all over again? I preferred a more closed ending to answer this mystery, though it's alright. (Could just be a forever unanswered case in the Department of Mysteries xD)

I'm also not a fan of how quickly the Travelor was introduced to the story. For a story where there's like, 12 chapters of build-up and suspense wondering what happened to Harry, and then have it quickly answered and accepted by the main characters in 1 chapter through the introduction of an out of canon element was a bit disappointing.

But, overall the suspense, style, writing descriptions and so on, made up for the slight disappointment I had at the end with the reveal of what was going on and the plot that was a bit confusing. Overall I still enjoyed this story and loved reading it and hope to find more stories like this. Thanks for writing it, you have a gift with writing :)

this is so confusing

FML I hate Rita

this is so messed yp

this is so confusing

what's up with the ending. there are a few questions that weren't answered. mostly from the epilogue. and the story was a little boring but I finished it so there is that, but that's only because I dislike leaving things until finished.
the only time I do that is if it's just so bad its impossible to continue, or if the Grammer and spelling is so bad that my head starts hurting from all the auto correcting I'm doing mentally, just to understand what's going on or being said

This is like... Silent Hill mixed with Twin Peaks mixed with Harry Potter shaken and then stirred. I like it.

I gotta first confess that I’m high as hell..that said, this was a very impactful beginning. I did not expect to read his suicide letter. Well done. It was a shock to say the least. I look forward to reading the rest.
With regards from Sweden

It seems rather nonsensical, dunno.