very lovely story! I love your style, from the way you build the story, tensions between couples to usage of words. Thanks for contributing such a nice story!

Now this was interesting! I loved reading every word of this story, you did a great job!

That was adorable! I can't fit to see how the others will deal with their relationships. I also wonder if a meeting will be called to discuss the identities thing again.

And the romance begins!

I find Ami and Zume so cute. They really have no idea what they are feeling. I also think you did a gre at job bringing the others together, you were creative about it too. Junshi as Rei's teacher/tutor and forcing Rei out of school to eliminate the student-teacher relationship issue was brilliant!

Oh, I also like the idea of Minako as a model for Sailor V products when she's secretly the heroine herself. It's funny! Although, I wonder if Luna and Artemis are k with her doing so.

Zune isn't very astute when it comes to social interaction, is he?

I was surprised by Junshi's polite character; I blame the fandom for making him so rambunctious in most stories.

Anyway, I really don't get why the two groups don't want to work closely with the other. They each guard one of the future rulers of the world, so why be distant?

The explanation is a little confusing and rather vague. Wiphile a prequel isn't a bad idea, I think a chapter dedicated to explaining the situation would suffice. It could cover the Senshi's kidnapping and the Shittenou's resurrection; I'm sure you are able to fit it all in one chapter.

AW! How cute I loved the new age spin of this! I can't believe I hadn't read this sooner. You are truely gifted in the art of story telling and romantic humor it's like reading a very satisfying chic flick. I hope that doesn't offend you!

well done... i really like it

where is part two!

This was really a fantastic read. I really enjoyed it. Also it was very sweet and I loved the crossdressing bit with Zume. poor boy.

I noticed that this was the end of part one. Hopefully there shall be a part two, three, etc!

~G.M.

Wonderful story, loved your personification of the characters and their interactions with one another. Definitely one of my favorite S/S stories to date.

are the poems by Alexander Pope, Eloisa to Abelard, seperate poems or just parts of a poem?

Luna and Artemis out of town? Where'd they go? And that was just AWESOME, when Rei and Jedeite(I still have some trouble with the new names) got together, and when everyone discovered the truth. Of coure, that part with Mako and Nephrite was pretty good, too. Hmm, he is a little...forward, isn't he? About the skirt, and , he's still the perfect guy for her. And Ami and Zoiciste, well, they're both a little shy, and very smart. Just fantastic! Can't wait to read part 2!

Maybe Usagi CAN get the secret out of him.

Fantastic story. Hilarious.

I loved it! This is one of the best stories out there. You should continue this story.