| Reviews for Lame Pick Up Lines |
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   disneygirl95 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008 Great one-shot! Love the last line. :) |
| HSMLUVER218 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 haha i loved it! so cute and funny! |
| skullprincess120 chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 sweet! |
| shakipollita chapter 1 . 12/11/2007 aw this one's way too cutee! |
| isacz chapter 1 . 12/2/2007 Aww! I LOVED it! it was so cute! great job! |
| bedbuddiesEB chapter 1 . 11/28/2007 so i guess u, i, an f r going to be together! LOVE IT! lol GREAT JOB! xoxo Ash xoxo |
| TroyellaZanessaFanGirl.no1 chapter 1 . 11/27/2007 aww cute! i love it! |
| zanessafan19 chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 omg the last part cracked me up! this is hilarious and original, great job! |
| SPERMINATED chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 HAHAHAHAA. YOU COULD'VE MADE IT M YOU DUMBASS \ i l y tho :) that was hilar/cute/m. :):):) “What?” “I bet my tongue can beat up your tongue.” HAHA. sorry kay great jov kimmot. |
| Messy.Scrawls chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 I can't believe you mentioned Clovis in it. xD Any who, you need to edit the "bingo" part in the story because there wasn't a space after it. o.o Other than that, it was AWESOME! ;D |
| WaterBugVA chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 Very cute and finally an original story line! Nice to see somebody come up with something original and have it work so well! Keep up the good work and look forward to seeing more from you! |
| LittleNightmare chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 one of the best one shots eva |
| CinderellaAtTheBall chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 oh my god! this story is so sweet! i could like, see it in my head as it was happening (which sounds kinda wrong, but whatever) you need to write more stories cuz you're really good! |
| LucWrites chapter 1 . 11/5/2007 lol I loved that! Great job! x |
| mysupermanwillcome chapter 1 . 11/4/2007 loved it. it was awesome! i know some really cheesy pick up lines 2 |
