Ohhh, this was such a sweet story. I really liked it!

Wonderful

ohhh its just so sweet.. i love them..

ohh just so sweet..

ohh sad that itvended that way. you need to get her

ohh i just love them..

oh oh.. he is surely in love.

ohh my i love him this way..

Holy shit! this was so fucking awsome! i am litterly reading it over and over!

Although I've read a couple of stories with the same idea, this one is by far the best. The whole development really captures how Usagi starts from uncertain innocent teen, to maturing when she starts to come into her sexuality. And then really how she comes to term with herself when heartache and sex come full in this story. It's really incredible how you managed to capture a girl's feeling and thoughts as she's coming of age as well as the discovery of her own power over the other sex. The story was captivating because it really is realistic and plausible. Even the development of Mamoru's feelings from lust, infatuation and then to love are flawlesly told. Great, great story. Read it couple of times and still can't get enough of it!

The last line of this chapter made me melt! Absolutely loving this

That was so cute! Stayed up all night cause I had to read it from beginning to end.

Oh my. Well. First off, let me say that the last time I read a Sailor Moon fanfic was probably around the time this was first published over 10 years ago. So this is my first purview back into this world, and oh my gosh I am so glad for it because in just four chapters you have reminded me of all the incredibly compelling reasons why I love Usagi and Mamoru.

It’s such a challenge, when you grow up and realize the characters you love don’t quite grow up with you, and when you look at them with adult eyes all you can see are the childish flaws. What I love about how you have written this is how it brings out that innocence without overdoing it while ALSO mixing in the sexuality that really is implicit (at least in the manga) without it being, for lack of a better word, creepy.

And ending this chapter with Mamoru recognizing he’s fallen in love as she is leaving to go be her strong woman alter ego? I can’t quite pinpoint what about that makes me swoon, but it absolutely does. And again it reminds me so much of the spirit of the manga, where Usagi really is strong and sexy while still innocent.

In any case, thank you for this piece. I really have enjoyed it.

Thank you for the amazing fan fic. All chapters are just so cute and endearing. I couldn't stop reading and wanted more. Mamoru character minum his cigaratte is very mature and.. I don't know, -manly? His affections for Usagi is the main attraction of this fic, I'd say. He gaves me butterfliesssssssss! Love it. Will explore your other fic! Thank you!

This is so cute! It gaves me butterflies, lots of it! I especially loves the scene where they have a talk with Usagi in his clothes... I could imagine it nicely along with Naoko drawing style!