Loved your spin on the story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Omg. I actually thought you were a girl, i mean Bob benit

Edward thinks she unfaithy. Golly ,wonder why. She runs off ,in the books, to see Jacob all the time. Even though she's been told his thoughts are not that of a friend. Comes back smelling like him, and knows he purposely puts out thoughts that aren't just a friend. Then the night of tears. Boo hoo. The way she's acting in these chapters, how could he think otherwise! Then to throw his suspicion in his face. What a mean spiteful WIFE. Does she EVER think about how much she hurts Edward, ever.

Please tell me that you made a sequel to this story:(

Good story

a doctor lives in the hotel? yaaaa okkkk

like you needed to make bella more vunerable...you have her "attacked" by a bunch of men again by a bar...just like what happened in the book...did that happen in this too? so now its twice? I'm sorry but...they could find a better looking victim...just saying

is this how the whole story is gonna be? what bella eats or doesn't? fainting...dizziness...crying...nothing but crap? its fucking lame! You know, not all pregnant woman are like this! attention whores! some women do pregnancy really fucking well. Why not have that be bella?

did you write this story before breaking dawn book published? because I remember the book published in 2008, and you wrote it in 2007. I love this story

I love this story, very much

Good story

This is humour and drama? 'Cause girl (or boy) all I'm reading is drama drama drama.

chapter 31-

let me get this straight...alice say a vision of bella going into labor so she tried to interrupt bella and Edward when they were gonna have sex cause...? shes just a stupid meddling bitch?

bellas acting really fucking stupid.

Ha, does Edward not know you never talk about anything pertaining to a woman's "time of the month". If it was me I would have hurt him. Lol