A great fic.
I read this in one day.

The garchomp fight was great. The gym battle was greater. The confession was the greatest.

Keep writing and thanks!

This was great

200 review yeah

You are Shakespeare my bro.

I fucking love this I just finished it I am so mother fuckin sad its over.

It really well reten ive red the whole fanfiction its awsome r u gonna make sequal to it i think u shoud i keap reading it over and over againg please make a sequal or respond to this review thx alot i really like it peece

im sorry if im being rude but mistys politoad evolved its now a poliwhirl

This story rox! I luv it!

Hey this was one of the best stories ive read but you still got a long way to go if you hope to beat PaulXion's story pokemon: the final journey, he may not be done with it yet but it the absolute best story ive ever read, you should check it out, it could help you write even better stories

I had thought I left a review for this chapter but it seems I hadn't? :/ Well, here it is.

Although not as big a Pokeshipper as I was long ago, it's hard to get away from one of the first fandom I was a part of. This was a great chapter to read...not to mention very sappy but you meant for that of course, right?

hey, ive been a diligent reader of yours for a while, so i was wondering if you could contact Jewelia and ask her to complete the reunion fanfic already. this would help me out a lot since she disables anonymuos reviews

i can wait till ur sequal comes pls post it soon plz

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS ALREADY, ITS BEEN NEARLY 3/4 OF A YEAR SINCE YOU SAID YOU WOULD! I AM WAITING PATIENTLY FOR A SEQUEL. WAITING...WAITING...WAITING...

...Please Hurry!

although it is a beautiful plot, and a wonderful chain of events, i have to say that in order to become a better writer, you need to work on your grammar, formatting, and word choice. for example, the whole your/you're, its/it's, their/there/they're, even though readers know what you mean, it is important to choose the right one, and it makes your works seem more serious. if you add that to your bombshell plots, then the fics you write would be even better!

Aww! This was a pretty sweet story! I really learned a lot about Sinnoh, cause I don't watch DP *shudders*. Haha, anyways, what Ash said at the end was really cute! Aww! Any story where he and Mist get together is a great story!