"Harry still could not throw it away. Severus had helped him it."
Severus had helped him it? That's not a sentence! That's a mess. The writing in this thing is awful. You really need a couple of betas to go through this thing and fix it. Until then, it's unreadable.

What the heck is a "firebolt" scar? The only firebolt I ever heard of was Harry Potter's broom. So the scar is shaped like a broom? Or did you really mean "lightning bolt", which is the way Harry Potter's scar is described by most people? This is really confusing to me.

You are fantastic and this story is mind blowing! This is in my top 10 favourite HP fanfictions. I swear I love you

This is already boring me. Sorry, it’s your story telling is boring.

That story actually created far more questions than it answered. :) Not that I mind.

Usually in all fanfictions, including those of you I've read, Fred and George never go anywhere without the other, whereas in this fic, they do quite a lot apart or at least get separated. It's interesting to read it like this.

Morin says the Goblet was confounded to only accept students over 20? They are all under 20, right?

Getting interesting!

Is Morin Harry? I mean, did (a) Harry travel back in time, become Morin, then travel back in time again to merge with Morin?

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Why'd it end? Honestly? You kept me on my toes, each chapter just creating more questions rather than answering them until they were. So good

I LOVE IT!

This is an amazing story and I am not ashamed to say it made me cry. 3

I know you probably won't, but would you consider writing a small sequel?

Very good in spite of grammatical errors

Gold story, but it's kind of a bit sad, because in almost (not all) all you fiction I read Sev is still alone in the end.

You use "And said:" quite a bit.