This was great. Not rushed, great story. And the way you ended it, right to the last line, was great.

there have been hints that the jazz-man makes a comeback in the next movie, i hope for michael bay's sake that's true; anyway i really enjoyed reading your fics, cute little bits of Prowl and Jazz. despite their lack of interaction during the cartoons and comics they really do make a fun pair in the fandoms

I like this. You don't see a lot of fics that deal with the time during the movie...at least -I- haven't seen yet anyway. But I like this one. Its short and too the point and yeah...one or the other always ends up dead...in the cartoon or the movie. I believe both survived in the comics for quite a long time though.

Still...I like your work. Keep writing!

Great viewpoint, I'd never really considered the stress they were under before leaving and how much of a relief Earth must have been.