This story might be 10 years old but those years have not diminished its quality.

This is one of my favourite Alec and Max stories. Great work.

Liked the story! I agree with Mole's assessment of the interactions between Max and Alec. I liked how you added uncertainty, after they admit to loving each other in the hallway, by having Alec say in the van that he was appealing to sentiment. It made Max wonder if he meant it or not. The metaphor of the orange roses was a nice detail.

WOW.. Just... WOW. ReAding this was soOoO worth my time

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I really enjoyed this story. I honestly never liked max and logan together, thought they just didn't fit as anything but friends. Never watched the show for them as a couple, watched only because the show itself was good. I loved Alec and like think they would have gotten together because they were actually better matched in everything including chemistry. Anyways I only read these kind of Fics, and really liked this one

I know you wrote and finished this ages ago... but I am only just now reading it and I gotta say that it is perfect. Gotta be one of the best Dark Angel fics I've ever read! I love the amount of Alec whump and the beautiful relationship you built between him and Max :) Just stellar!

I really liked this, your writing style is fluid and the storyline was so satisfying :)

Hey! Lol, I know this review is so so late in comparison to when you posted this story, but just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading it :) Great job!

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This was good at the beginning but then as it progressed, you made it kinda ridiculous. No offense. But Max would have heard the two guards coming before they showed and she and Alec could have taken them both on easily. Two against two. Max and Alec are both alphas and strong. Also, Alec would have completely realized that guy was a familiar. And Max would have found out about what logan did to Alec somehow. Also, Alec would never be afraid of logan. Alec being afraid of logan is just weird cuz i can't see it happening at all. No matter how injured Alec was, i don't see him being afraid. Thanks for this. Max/Alec ftw! ;D

"She loved him in that moment.

She decided to express this with violence."

ROFLOL!

Only just started reading the Dark Angel fanfics as mostly i'm a Buffy fan. But loved Dark angel to and was so annoyed when it got cancelled because I really wanted Max and Alec to end up together and i think thats where it would have headed if it hadnt. Anyway enough of my rambling the point is this is really well written and I dont give out praise to easily. I've read alot of Fanfic and if its bad I tell people so. This is particularly good because I could actually imagine this as an episode, say a serious two ending or something. Its really good,kept me hooked all the wish it had been longer. Thanks for making my day more entertaining.

Really liked this one. Max and Alec slowly coming into their love and Max having to face her feelings - or lack thereof - for Logan. Great action scenes too.

I liked Logan's little meltdown, definite temporary insanity, the whole scene from Max's confession through to threatening Alec was great. I can see Logan getting that intense so it wasn't weird or out of character for me.

All in all, very enjoyable.

Great beginning. The familiar edgy tension between Alec and Max until she realises he's really hurt. Logan is definitely the man out here and good riddance. I liked the easy flow of camaraderie between Max, Alec and Josh. Really nicely written.

can't help but notice how you wrote Max kissing Alec after he throws up... not the greatest choice