i could picture it easily

its good! continue!*chants* i like it. its nice to see just an average day as a fanfic! ill definatly read it! gogogo~!

Damn, I thought Konata was really smoking. My eyes didn't read the fine print.

Okay, let me start with some corrections. First of all, you don't call your older sister "chan". Now don't be very frustrated. I'm just pointing out some errors so your next chapter would be much better. Second, Kagami addresses Konata by her first name and her first name alone. Lastly, if you're going to preview the next chapter, make it a bit shorter because most of the time the events tend to pop out with long previews.

On top of that, it's a great fanfic. Hope you're reading this because I'm inserting a quarter for another chapter.

Oh yeah well YOUR FACE BITCH

story SUCKS; GB2/SCHOOL/

FAGGOT