O m g! Those two are insane, or should I say chickenshits!

They really need to get this relationship business settled!

ok, i wish these were in 1 or 2 chapter increments because on a good day regular review I forget half.
i was told i don't make such good reviews.
anyway, Joe putting a tracker in Steph's patch was low.
I would have love to see Joe's face when Steph walked out with Ranger knowing darn well he's most likely lost his girl. lol.
the games are fun and the hidden caves, wow Tank kissed Steph back w tongue. did not see that coming.

oh boy. for what reason did Ranger have to drug Steph unless it was because she was upset over what Joe did.
omg, landing on a car is horrible enough but if she hadn't she'd surely be dead!
I thought Ranger and Frank spoke and he asked Ranger his intentions and told him not to hurt his daughter? I would think Frank would remember Ranger.

Seph found the missing cash.
she and Ranger are not together and he went on a mission. so not good!

Oh my! What a place to end lol - very good story - I have to hurry and go read the sequel.

One of my favorite stories. Someone mentioned it on one of the forums the other day, and inspired me to read it again. Thanks for sharing and take care.

oh for the love of Pete! is he serious?! still not relationship material, after living together!what a let down! I am so disappointed in him...and he took a mission!

Omg what an ending. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Oh Gosh, this story is one heartwrenching thing after the other and I feel a little sick at the ending. Steph and Ranger are always stupid for and about each other, one or the other always bolts and messes up the good. I hope they get it together in the sequel. Good job writing, though;)

I didn't expect that ending...

Well written. Now I have to rudh off and read Nine Months to find out what happens.

Interesting story. Some inconsistencies with the plot line and gaps in the story but a good effort especially for a first story.

Another very good story, your stories seem right, like the way these characters should be. I'm thinking that kiss between Steph and Tank may have been part of your muse for Club Induction! Love it...thanks!

Excellent story. I can't wait to read the sequel.

Mag

I like the story! you have the characters pretty accurate, but I think the last part was a bit rushed, can't wait to start the next part

I really enjoyed the story. Inventive and entertaining. One suggestion though. When you jump tenses and change where the perspective of the story it kinda gets confusing. What I mean is when the story jumps from being spoken from a first person perspective from Stephanie to a first person perspective of Ranger especially in the same few paragraphs it gets confusing.

Also... Dad and Ranger talked when Ranger went to dinner at Stephanie's house. But at the hospital he spoke like he wasn't sure of his name. It was a little confusing there to.

There were a few typos and spelling errors but overall a very good read. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Holy Cow! That was awesome. Totally left me hanging. I'm off to read Nine Months!

Kate

You already know that I love your stories, but I just had to leave you kuddo's here too.

...Just a thought, you really should post 'Togetherness' for everyone here... I LOVE THAT STORY!

Stephannie