This is so good. I’m pretty sure it probably won’t be updated because it’s 2020 and this was edited a long time ago. So just know it’s really great

I really like the characterization of Shawn in this fic! The story gives just enough to make you want more *right away*. Though you'll probably never come back to it more than 10 years later, I will hold out hope.

Hey, I was just wondering if you’re from Montana? I am! My sister lives down in Bozeman, actually! I just thought it was funny you mentioned it!

I’m betting after 10 years, you’re probably not planning on continuing this story, are you? It was an interesting read up til now!

Pls finish. Wonderful storyline, you could really go places with this Long story short, I absolutely loved it. Another 2018 reader.. out, peace!

Plz finish! Reading in 2018!

I'm sorry a story this good can't be just left like this. lol is it possible and ok if someone else can pick it up and finish it? It's so good!

I know it's been 9 years but please please finish this awesome story!

This story is amazing! There's some interesting literary techniques you make use of very well (such as in the first chapter where you mix Henry's and Shawn's POV to make the reader think that Shawn is about to show up on Henry's doorstep), and you are a master at creating and building suspense. It's got a good pace to it as well, and I can only say how sorry I am that I'll never get to read what happens next. Seriously well done and thanks for sharing this story. 3

(looks at watch)...9 years. I've been sitting here for 9 years. My ass has grown fast to the chair. Come on. We know you've still got it. Please finish. I desperately need a shower. (fist bump)

I love this so much! PLEASE UPDATE! This is SO good!

Oh, I so wish you finished this! It's an incredible story line and amazingly realistic.

Really depressed this story just ends here. Was really getting into it!

Update soon please

?..is there any chance of you picking this up again? The plot and idea are really interesting, and Id love to see more, but it hasnt been touched in years...