Cute little story.

-Ed

Toph...

(0o0)Sweeet. (0o0)

haha! I loved it.

wow! this was really great1 i love Tokka to death

heehee! it made me laugh, AND it was fluffy! i LOVE it!

hahah last two lines are priceless! love it! continue!

It was very cute, humorous, and fluffy at the same time. I really liked it.

I did have a few problems with it, however. The whole concept seems way out of the whole "box". It's quite obvious who the pairings would be in this reguard in Katara's case. I just don't think Sokka would actually even like the idea of hugging Aang, either, with Spin the bottle. He would have just put his foot down.

I also don't think Toph would suddenly ask Sokka for a kiss, or even two. Maybe, I could see the first time a little bit, but her asking for another? I think she would have been like:

"This is a kiss? That was horrible." Toph crossed her arms and turned away from Sokka. A small grin grew upon her face.

I think it might have been a little better with something like that. You also want to watch how you use author notes. I noticed you put some enclosed author notes throughout the story - don't do that. It breaks the flow of the story. Author notes are meant for the end of the story, or the beginning.

And make sure after someone speaks in quotation marks, that you place a period after their sentence. For instance, you put:

-QUOTE: "Alright then Toph, just pucker up your lips and I’ll kiss you"

"Alright, thanks Sokka"

-REVISED: "Alright then Toph, just pucker up your lips and I’ll kiss you."

"Alright, thanks Sokka..."

See, that way you're using proper grammar. :-)

Overall, I enjoyed this story, and I hope to read more from you. Just try to correct these few points I brought out to help better your writing. ;-)

~Signed,

Kish's Migoto Koneko

hahaha, that last bit reminded me of the fanart i posted on my devart, which ill take this opportunity to whore off right now XD:

ht*tp:*/apie7*7.

minus the stars!

and that was very cute! everyone also seemed very in-character X3

ohh the tokka i loved it it filled my need for tokka at least for now keep writeing because i'll keep reading

-Megi

Cute! You had everyone in character, I think. I loved how Aang stopped the bottle. Lol. That is so something he would do.

That was great! It was very good! The only thing that that I could find was that you left out a few commas, but besides that, It was great!