Nice. Flowing, makes sense, tied well at the end. Keep writing. :)

OMG!Soawesome

Beautiful enough said.

...SQUEE! Haha. That was really romantic and well-written. I love the way you write!

Omg I have no flippin idea how you captured the longing and love in such a short poem! This was amazing! I wish I could write this well, ah but alas, the fates do not wish for my hand to write such beautiful words as I have seen here. I applaud you my good author.

Holy Cow! That is really good! I almost cried when I read it. In my opinion, poetry isn't given the credit it should have. I could see Inuyasha carefully watching over the girl who holds his heart, hidden in the shadow of the tree, leaning against the base and restless.

I am reviewing everything I read from you. And so far, I can't find a complaint one! I love it all! You are so talented! I always considered myself a writer and a poet, but I think you put me to shame. All of a sudden, my stuff seems to suck out loud! *LOL* I only WISH I could write this well...

I don't know how you captured such longing and hope, but you did. I got choked up. This poem is going on my fave's list.

I love it. I honestly don't have anything else to tell you...it's just so beautiful.

It was short, but it honestly didn't need to be much longer. I think that you captured a wonderful sentiment, longing, and adoration between the two. And InuYasha really does watch Kagome when she sleeps, lol. I think it was very well done. Blessed be. ~Neptune's Mask

I. I. I loved it, it was brillant, wow. :) :) ;) smile

aww that was beautiful nice job

*tear* so sweet... if ur not in love. than u must just be a great poet... i love it.

wow that was awesome im speechless i mean its awesome and you know how to write you should write more like this and just pu inu and kags not any kikyou if you do kill her and case sloved. sorry if you like her but i dont so i could care less how you kill her if you write a story or a sequel to this that is.

T_T stunning. not many poems here can evoke emotion and rhyme at the same time and be so good. I LOVED it. that is why it shall go into my favorites *clickies button* XD Hope you have more