I. Love. THIS! It was soo good tho the "you's" were throwing me off for a second. lol.

Cute! Thanks for writing!

liked it.

OMG, HIS SISTER. hahahaha, even i forgot lol lol lol. you are amazing. this is amazing. perfect. the best. LOVE IT LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

Nice. I really liked this. :)

squeal? really good, gosh, i didn't make the connection either, i was like "oh" when he said it was his sis. liked that it was in 2nd person btw

hela... are you serious? You're lucky that you wrote a sequel because if you ended it like that I would have had to stage a protest! That was really really fantastic. I loved all of Jess' mannerisms that you had in it. It made me feel at home... well you know what I mean. I had just watched an episode of Gilmore girls from season 3, and reading this reminded me of it so much. Oh and by the way, making it feel like I was Rory was an incredible way to tell the story because you know that any girl would kill to be in her shoes. Absoutely wonderful, my dear. I wish I could read the sequel right now but I have too much studying to do... but don't worry I will!

Ah! Hela! I love this so much! LOVE! And I am going to tell you on MSN right now how much I love it!

Oh that was wonderful.

When Jess told Rory Lilly was his sister. I couldn't help but laugh too. Like I was in Rory's shoes since I (I'll admit it) also didn't get the connection. Great job!

Love it. Your writing is so subtle and descriptive. Rory's reactions to Jess are just perfect.

really nice! specially the last oart was trully cutE !

that was awesome! i loved it..

very well written..

and the convo between them in the hotel room was soo good!

good job

Awesome, so sweet, you had me grinning ear to ear reading this. I would love to think this is how they ended up. LOVED IT!

I love it! Please continue

This was such a cute story, and I love that they didn't meet up right after the show but you gave them some time so they were ready to be together!