This was such a great story and even though it's unfinished I enjoyed it a lot! It helped that there was no big cliffhanger and Lily and James were left in a good place.
To be honest I was more upset that we didn't get to see Providence, which was apparently planned to release long ago and judging by the short snippet it sounded fantastic and exactly like the kind of fics I love :/

im crying... this is so beautiful

383838838 stars out of ten! It's so good! I read fhe entire thing and parts of it made me cry!

I love this whole fic your really talented especially with emotions

This chapter was wonderful. I understand hour Sirius must feel. Heck, even I'm jealous of James and Lily.

Hi! Great story, lots of development in many aspects of the plot and characters! The one thing that I personally don't like about it is how weak you portray Lily. I viewed her as someone who wouldn't cry just because they wouldn't see their boyfriend for a couple hours - a little too melodramatic for me I guess. Other than that, great job. I love your writing style and especially the characters inner monologues!

GAHHH! This whole thing made me sooo mad! Not about your writing, I loved that. JAMES.. how is this Sirius's fault? He just wanted some marauder time, which they obviously haven't had in forever.. Sirius didn't act like he resented lily, he loves her as a sister. OBVIOUSLY james needs 2 manage his time better.. even if he loves lily..and i NEVER saw Sirius say that he wants James 2 all 2 himself. And if Lily was hurt then sirius just needs 2 tell her that he just wanted 2 spend time with his best friend and thats not her fault cause James chose not 2 hang out with the marauders. And i think shes just TOTALLLLY overreacting.. if a guy wants 2 spend time with his best friends, then how does he resent her? LOL and James rrly has problems if he can't b with his friends, doin wat he loves 2 do, without thinking of wen "marauder time" will b over and her can b with the girl he loves. Ok that was worded pretty badly, cause i know that he said he enjoyed hanging out with them again, but in the next he keeps on talking about Lily. I just think he umm idk..kinda..overattached/protective. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely LOVVVEE Lily and james, but i hate that james can't c that Sirius isn;t exactly happy and wat happen 2 Lily was not intentional or his doing! And i don't get how wat sirius said has any connection 2 wat Rosier did. He didn't know that if James spent one evening with the marauders Lily would get hurt... I mean COME ONN. Ok and the last thing was well the last sentence. "But I won't forget" I'm just thinking WTF does he have to forgive and forget? He was the one being an outright git! It's his fault sirius wanted bonding time, because if he hadn't ditched them in the first place, he rlly wouldn't have needed 2 confront James. OKKK my rant is over! I just don't think James's actions r justified. Wow i do like your writing though! i mean i stopped in the middle of a completed story cause the writing made me have a strong opinion! anyway great job :D

I hope you are alive.

I liked this story, I wish you would still continue even though it has been about 4 years!

that was beautiful

really. it was amazing.

i think you should finish it. write like one or 2 more chapters, b/c where u left it off-its obviously not done.

good job.

Three years later and you still haven't finished it? WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY? I seriously LOVED this sotry. You're writing is amazing aand so intensly captivating that it is early in the morning and I've been reading this since earlier this afternoon. Do you know how lovely you are? Do you know the fierce amount of emotion and exquisite passiom and such profound art that you write with? Well, if you didn't then, now you do.

I think if you ever get to write the last chapter, which I seriously hope and encourage you to do, it should be written from Lily's POV. I hope you get a sudden flash of inspiration, but if you don't I am content with what you have right now. Love your writing and am anticipating much more! Welcome to my favorite's list.

Good for you Marlene. Damn good for you.

How could you, lily? How could you Sirius? How could you make me cry and my heart break? because you're a fabulous writer.

I'm crying right now. thanks a lot. :(

Oh. My. Lupin. He did NOT just tell Lily off like that! I officialy hate Sirius right now.