very funny beggining confusing ending,it surprizes me that achilles has so much love for a person and to find out how old patroclus i cant beleieve he dies at seventeen SEVENTEEN thats amazing. tell me is this real story line or not but still amazing story

Endearingly sweet, I must say. Quite a change from the other stories of yours I've read, yet written with the same quality of writing- that is to say, excellent.

i've been looking for decent fics with this pairing for ages

thank you so much for writing something so beautiful, i really enjoyed it

I loved your story. I may view the two as a(more-than-Friends pair, as I prefer that side of story) and though I also see this story as with such concept, I also wish to see an author's true intention. That's why I say this is beautiful, in both views, for me _

(Though wasn't Achilles with a girl before the first battle? Or was it assumed that that was the girl's house in the movie? Or is this based from the book?)

Yet another excellent story. I really liked the part where the bid, bad Achilles walks into his room only to discover his dear little cousin fast asleep in his bed. It was simply adorable, & I cannot tell you how many times I have found my much younger brother brother in my bed after I have come home from kickboxing practice. You capture their relationship so well. Good luck & happy writing!

Oh, wow. Do I have the first review? Sweet! Lol. Okay, here we go!

I absolutely loved this part! “Your bed’s more comfortable,” replied a deep voice, groggy with sleep. “Why’re you here?”

“I live here,” Achilles retorted, finding his impatience was no longer so difficult to feign. He reached over and gave his intrusive younger cousin a playful cuff on his blonde head which barely protruded out from under the covers. “Get up!”

That just struck me funny! And I also loved how Patroclus asked what Agamemnon would do without Achilles. That was great!

Awesome story, Halo! I'm off to read/review your other one now! See you Saturday!

~Tori

Halo, this was great! By far, my favorite deleted scene. This line was -so- Patroclus: "I thought you were ‘rising with the sun’ today, cousin."

I could actually hear him say it. ;) And really, who wouldn't want Patroclus' voice in their head? :D Haha! This is a great idea too, just having all these little one-shots.

Whilom