I loved this story, Neville is such a great character and you gave him and Hannah their own story beautifully. I wish it hadn’t stopped!

Very nicely done. I quite enjoyed your story and I enjoyed the way you wrote it. Thank you for the nice read.

Great story :D I really liked the character you have given to Hannah and other things like being sensitive :D And story is almost like canon, it was realistic :D

Aww, this is the only proper story about Neville and Hannah. Thanks for a good read

GREAT STORY, Best Hannah and Neville story that I have read. Wish you had finished it.

this was so good! i loved it!

neville's such an awesome character if he is done correctly and i really liked what you did with Hannah... really all your characters are likeable (except for the villains of course :D)

great job and i can only wish that you could continue that sequel you started earlier... with your writing skills and characters I know it would be a great read

pretty please ;)

This is so sweet and you've done a great job with Neville's and his grandmother's characterization. I can't really say anything about Hannah as she didn't have a large role in the books, but I like what you've done with her.

I've always loved this story. The characters are portrayed beautifully, and there's enough danger in it to give it a bite that I've remembered for a long time. Spectacular job.

What a great read! The writing was flawless, the characters were great, and the plot was nicely unpredictable. The setting of the story was refreshing in terms of timing and locales (summer, the Longbottom house, Ministry, St Mungo's combination) and really helped to highlight the situation involved. I found your use of secondary HP characters quite creative.

It seems like "The Year of Living Dangerously" is a sequel of sorts to this story. I certainly hope that you continue! Thanks for your effort with these wonderful stories.

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I guess Neville/Hannah aren't that popular a pair - this is the one of the best stories about them I've ever read.

I think it felt a little rushed at the end - Arthur and Arnie sort of steal the thunder. And it's begging for an epilogue, if not a full sequel.

Thanks for this. It was a great read.

good chapter... not easy to put all these strong characters into one room and be able to make it natural and smooth. Well done.

And Go Grans...

well written once again. This chapter really moves the plot along.

I see Neville's learning to fly as almost symbolic of his growing into his own person. I dont know if you intended this, but it works well.

I started this a while back then lost track of it, so glad to find it again.

You do dialog very well, conversational and natural... not always easy.

Fabulous!

wow this was amazingly well written. I haven't seen many Neville Stories (with him as one of the central characters) and I think that's beacuse no one really knows how to write him, you on the other hand have spun an awesome tale and have made Neville such a full character and its great. Hannah and neville in my opinion is one of the sweetes couples in Hp fandom, this is my favourite story written about them.

This story made me giggle, cry, and love theese characters so very much. So thank you for writing this piece and sharing it with us.

Cheers on this :)

-Vicki

I enjoy your take on grandma... good chapter.