Great job. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

An original concept, and I liked the progression of Mack's breakdown. A nicely shocking ending, too.

“That’s not Mack.”

Oh wow, that was heartbreaking. I could vividly visualize everyone's pain. Great work.

Aww, poor Mack! That's so sad. I was almost in tears. Fine job on this...even though Mack is not the same friend that they once knew. :( Keep up the good work!

That was really sad.

I liked how you went through showing the little things to building up. But in the end, Mack was gone even if the body was functioning, that was interesting and it made sense.

Good job.