Why do you have the notion that ron and hermione would get together without harry? He is the arbitrator. Not quite sure what you are referring to when yousay tonks is taking newts she went to all seven years of school. Auror academy requires owls and newts in at least potions this was shown in mcgonnagal’s job counseling in Order of the Phoenix.

OK, I've changed my mind. This is now High School Musical Harry Potter, and I love it

I find it sad that the only way you can see Hermione with Ron is by changing her entire personality. otherwise, a decent songfic so far

what the fuck ron/hermione is trash

good read

So I’m sure it’s been asked before but I’ve read this story several times and a question keep coming up why in the beginning of the story did you say that Harry couldn’t pass on his curse but then here in ch 15 he suddenly can but he only passes on the same powers that he has?

Okay I don't know if it was pure coincidence but these songs I love these songs I love them if I could I would listen to him every moment of the day

Very nice ending.

Ok while i am loving your stoy i have a few points i have been holding back until the end for but after this i need to say them.

Ok firstly this is NOT a harem story.
Why you ask well there are more than one way you can look at it;
* One way is they are not a Turkish, Persian or other Middle East countries family of old,
* Nor is it the manga and anime definition as that requires 3 more more females,
* nether are they wives nor Concubine.

What they are is a normal (in they way the relationship works) poly relationship or for tag purposes a mutil relationship at most.

Ok now that little rant is out of the way onto the other issue.

You have this strange reset going on with people where they reset or sometimes readicly switch personalities;

*Molly Wesley, when we first get to meet your rendition of the Wesley Matriarch she is made to understand Harry's point of view, then at Christmas we see her supporting the relationship Ginny is in with Harry and Tonks not only that but is applaud when Ron Insults Harry's parents. Now suddenly its like. None of this ever happened?

*Ron i will let slide as well Ron in your story seems a little mentally unstable jumping and switching personalities and emotions as fast as harry can move in your story.

*Malfoy appears to be either suicidal, have extreme learning problems or brain damage to continue to attack, insult or piss of someone who he know can and has killed and only did not kill him due to Ginny.

*The Moron of Magic also is either with the death eaters or should have a bed next to the Hero of Oblivion (Gilderoy Lockhart) as he KNOWS Harry is the only one who can defeat Tom Mavolo Riddle.

Other wise i really am enjoying your story and wish i could stop reading it as i have work i should be doing.

So i will likely read more but i just needed to say these things before i continued to read.

Thank you for the story.

fair story. a few fixes/plotline holes need filling. one is the constant bi-polar acts by Ron. biggest is "I will never turn them" reference to Tonks and Ginny, but a few chapters later they are turned. then the meeting where the bite/bond is explained and Tonks and Ginny's reaction is reverse of when the event took place. if author would clean them up would be a better read.

Wow amazing job some I think you have performed a miracle you actually improved Harry Potter loved your story thank you

Best fanfiction in the world

A few confusing odds and ends, but overall a good, solid, entertaining read.

Wow is Harry ever a tool, two bites and all the other crap. Finds out Sirius is dead told prophecy and no one takes him to a healer. This is just to much Cult Dumbledore kool aid fic.

Well I like the story and the characters so far. There are problems though. The first of which is how old exactly is Tonks? You have referred to her as an adolescent which she wouldn't be at this point, as she should be about 7 years older than Harry. She is also a fully trained Auror so her talking most of the core classes would be rather pointless. They only take the best of the best after all. Then you seem to be a bit confused in places with what people are doing or wearing. Now as for Draco breaking the broom, it is not very clear how he does it, though I would assume some sort of enchantment. In any case it is a bit too out in the open even for him. Also Harry revealing his wings at that time was pointless as he should have been able to stop her fall with any number of spells, not to mention the teachers or other players. He did fall off his broom 3rd year and was caught by Dumbledore with reasonable ease. In any event it is still quite the enjoyable story.