Nicely done! I enjoyed that!

This is cool!

Salutations!

As a nitpicky reader, the only mistake that stood out to me was "ceased" (ended) when you meant "seized" (taken a hold of). I read this one before, but I couldn't remember how it ended, so I reread it.

I liked the story, and I'm glad Zack got to come back. Would be awesome if Angeal and Genesis made an appearance, but oh well

~L

I absolutely LOVE how you've done Sephiroth in this chapter. And Cloud too. The way you describe the intangible connection between the three of them is great. Yes, Sephiroth and Riku do look so much alike...I wonder why there aren't more fics about that. _ Anyhoo, awesome fic! I love the plot so far.

Wow this was great, kinda sucks that it ended. But you've written other fanfiction so I guess I'll go read some more.

Oh man... this was so sad! I had a feelign it would end this way but I hoped... I really, REALLY hoped it wouldn't come to this. I knew that one way or another Seph was going to end up dead (it is SO hard to think that) but I hoped that Cloud, or even Zack, would be the ones to kill him. Man... is it raining angst or am I just seeing things. *laughs bitterly* Well, besides how sad this was, it was wickedly brilliant,

awesome! I loved this story!

ooh! cool! I love this theory! can't wait to see what happens!

ooh I like this!

-sniff- Beautiful! (wipes away tears) I thank you for this, its how FFVII should have ended. I loved it! -bows- Thank you! T_T

It was soo good, and yet so sad, Thanks for such a great fic! -stands up and claps-

I loved it as a fic. Poor Sephy, but it had to be done. Riku is strong indeed. You did prove Zack's awesomness, I like it.

*cries* as much as i know it was the best for him, i still wish that seph hadn't died. and i agree with zack, that the three of them are going to need tons of therapy. riku killed his father, zack had to fight his best friend again and cloud already needs therapy

...and it's done. That was a great ending. I liked each of the characters roles. The pace was excellent too. Oddly enough, th eonly thing that bothered me was that Riku kept casting Curaga instead of his Health Potion Spell...I am so strange. I really enjoyed how all of this played out though. Zack especially was very well written and I liked his thoughts on his freinds, including Sephiroth. Well done.

a bitter end to a bitter rilvary,its sadly poetic.

-_-such a sad yet happy ending! overall, i luved it! congrats on finishing!-_-