| Reviews for The Beginnings of a Death Eater |
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alliaddams chapter 1 . 6/14 Lucius is one of my favourite characters in the whole HP universe - Loved to see his trouble maker and doting boyfriend sides. As usual, super well-written story and character development. |
Rowena-Moon-Moon chapter 18 . 2/7 This was such a good story! I loved the dynamics between your characters... I especially liked the softer side you occasionally showed of Abraxas... On my way to read some more of your work! |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2017 Sirius had it coming. |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/1/2016 Your stories are both interesting and a bit haunting. This I is about my third read of the shortest story in your collection. Your stories show the Death Eaters as real people. |
Dixie.f.9 chapter 18 . 1/21/2016 Great story about Lucius, Severus and Narcissa. |
Kintama-Hime chapter 14 . 12/14/2015 Well done on describing the hilarious strutting scene. It got even better when they were "cleaning the bathroom." Lockhart's appearance here was one of the funniest cameos in fanfiction! |
sarcastic chapter 18 . 7/30/2015 Wow. You're right in saying I need to reread Death Eater No More, this story completely changed my perspective of Lucius, and Brax for that matter but I understand him. One thing I just noticed is that Mateo wasn't in this or the last story, is there a reason for that specifically or did it just happen like that? I feel like Horatio would've kept him from the family...on to the next! |
sarcastic chapter 17 . 7/28/2015 And just when I was going to go in on Bella for being so hateful to her husband...the end happens. :-/ Poor Brax. I'm glad Lucius made it... Well, I will say I always imagined Bella actually being devoted to her husband almost as much as Voldemort...I don't know. Like they were devoted to each other, under Voldy lol |
sarcastic chapter 16 . 7/28/2015 Severus is the little creeper, isn't he? Lol...it works as an adult...as a teen, it's frightful. Ha! |
sarcastic chapter 15 . 7/27/2015 Bellatrix is a mess lol...she really tickles me. |
sarcastic chapter 10 . 7/26/2015 Oh, the old line "it's hurting me more than you..." Lmao! I don't think I believe that in this case...AT ALL. Haha |
sarcastic chapter 8 . 7/24/2015 It's like...on one hand, you don't wanna believe Voldemort was a virgin because he was so old...but then you think he hates everyone, so it makes sense. Then again, you just KNOW he had to have been with Bellatrix the way she acted lol |
sarcastic chapter 5 . 7/24/2015 And now Abraxas sees himself in his son...two knuckleheads, he had... |
sarcastic chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 Lord have mercy, Lucius! The one thing I kept thinking when I started this was it is a shame how much Brax has become like his father, yet I don't think he'd have told his father as much if he were in Lucius' place, so that's a testament to how unlike Horatio he still is. However, even though I know you had to write it like that (these ARE Malfoy men), I still wish Cassius hadn't gone out how he did...that was the trigger for him. |
Azaisya chapter 18 . 6/29/2015 That was amazing. I honestly didn't expect much, because I was never really interested in these characters. But holy cow it blew my mind. The relationships between the characters and how the plot developed into the hellhole that is the Malfoy’s lives in the actual series. . . . That was all brilliant. You've written a deeper, more meaningful story in 18 chapters than some people do in 50, and that's really impressive. |