yea you should

i loved this chapter please write more and i think doin it from edwards point of view is great so plz do it plz.

I'm a little confused about the whole smelling her own blood thing, but apart from that it was great.

THis is awsome and yes u should write edwards point of view! it would be so cool!

Yes, you should try it. I want to see how it turns out!

You HAVE to write another story ! I really want to see what Edward thinks of this change in Bella !

I love this ! It's amazing ! Keep up writing your amazing at it ! ]

great job on chapter one, one from edward's point of view would be interesting.

this was really good but i think you should just add on another chapter about her powers and how she adjusts to her life

So I think you should make the next chapter in Edward's POV but then you should keep going in Bella's.

I loved the fanfic but i think u should continue and keep writing more with the first chapter. it would be good if u did it in edwards POV too!

Good beginning, continue, author:P

I like this.

Please write another version it is a good story

um?

I wish you would continue with this one but it's your mind.

Go for it if you want to.

Au Revoir!

I am not opposed to this same story from Edward's viewpoint, but I really think you should write more on this one! You're a good writer and you left us hanging :)

(Not that you shouldn't write Edward's. You should just write both)

In any case, thanks for sharing your story! I enjoyed it