awsum! but idk about you but to me it seemed like it was starting to be rushed right after you left off at chapeter 10...

ASSHOLE ASSHOLE ASSHOLE ASSHOLE ASSHOLE BOTH OF THEM...ASSHOLES

i'm confused but i think if i keep reading i will figure i out

rin and obito were chunnin at age 6 w/kakashi then he became jonin at 12 (you need to be 7 to enter the chunnin exams so yea they were that good)

HEY! naruto broke the forth wall ROFL!

yay

but the forth hokagae aleady has a wive and her name is Kushina Uzumaki not autushay.

When undercover, you wouldn't want to use a name that in any way resembled your real name.

lol, it looks good so far i cant wait to read the rest

this does not deserve to be called a story. to me it seems more like an outline for a series.

honestly, i think you should take this and expand it, elaborate on it.

split it up into blocks by stopping at the time skips. im sure its within your ability and unless you screwup severly, i think it will come out wonderfully

nice chapter

i a little less confused good job the darkness that has surronded me is slowly lifting hey who shut off the nightlight Orchimaru get back here with my Sasuke nightlight you child molester

I thought they were on there way to a castle to train what the F* is going on im so confused why arent the drugs working I mean why arent the chapters continuing were you left off help

Okay i like were the story is going but your loesing me and confusing the hell out of me with your writing style and that saying something good job im completly lost but its such a good story onwards and upwards or downwards I go Um Im lost where am I

It spelled Bastards. Good story so far.