Reviews for Naruto: The Leaf in the Whirlpool
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
I can not accept when a parent is away from his/her child and still makes another baby...that's just seems wrong to me...it seems inhuman...it seems unfair to both the children...i..I can not forgive that...that ignorance...that selfishness...it's like disregarding one and making another to compensate...that's just wrong...no matter the logic...no matter the reason...that is wrong...I can not in good conscience say that I like minato and kushina...a child who was alone without u suddenly knows he has a sister and u are back...that sister had everything while u were alone..iruka and Hinata how does that make up for 13 years without u...so might say it was bad luck for him...maybe...maybe it was...but what was the reason for making another baby ...no I can and will not accept that...I...am heartbroken...I can not read this
yindragonkiba chapter 25 . 5/25/2017
love it
NarHina chapter 25 . 7/13/2016
Good but you stopped at the good point and we don't know what Naruto Bloodline from his Uzumaki blood is yet.

Also Kiba seemed to not like Naruto I am actual hopping that there will be more confrontation with him.

Why did Sakura's eyes turn red? damn so many questions and no answer.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 6/22/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 6/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 6/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
grindylowsforlunch chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
An uzumaki woman dying while giving birth? Haha
QuentinTNT chapter 25 . 7/21/2015
Great Story wish it was completed!
Dare queen chapter 25 . 6/19/2015
this is awesome ;)
bugmaster chapter 25 . 11/16/2014
Well...its really good I really,won't to read more ...you just got to upload. Hope you have good days. UPLOAD SOON THOUGHT.
Rosenmaedchen chapter 8 . 4/25/2014
Hey I really like your story... but I have to ask Naruto is a boy in your story, right because nee stands for sister...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
That was a very cool/ominous/epic/foreshadowing poem, who was it by?

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Nightmare daniell61 chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
Awesome chappy :D

also thats a pretty nice quote :p
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